Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

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3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
07 Sep 2016, 8:47pm
"If I'd face fifteen years in a federal military prison? Hell yeah, I would. Two weeks is a short time to get used to a cybernetic. It took me six weeks when I got mine.", Rebecca walked over to the table 4 meters opposite of Strykers bed and took one of the plastic decoration stones up. Then she turned towards him.

"Catch.", she said, then she threw the plastic stone in a flat curve towards his head.
07 Sep 2016, 8:59pm
Stryker would try to catch the plastic decoration with the cybernetic, and failed miserably. The stone bouncing harmlessly off the claw and onto the floor near the metal wreckage that once was a proud and dignified bed railing. He shrugged again. "If your not willing to listen, or even consider the possibility that the whole ordeal was some colossal cosmic joke. A fraking mistake, then there is no point in me trying to explain it."

He reached over and took a glass of water in his left hand. It was clear that that hand was not his dominate.

"So, what now, we discuss my sentence within the Federation even though the incident occurred in an independent system? Oh sure, Fed officers happened to be there. In fact, as I recall, no one actually had any firearms drawn until you two showed up..."
07 Sep 2016, 9:25pm
Rebecca stared at the plastic stone on the floor for a moment.

"Oh, I consider the possibility. It just seems, like I said, unlikely. Your inability to use the full potential of your cybernetic explains it to a degree. A lot of people in the docks were on your side, too. One guy even offered to take the responsibility for the grenade. For federal law it's irrelevant if an assault on a member of the armed forces took place inside or outside of it. Only the place were you go to court for it is relevant. Military court, of course."

She walked a bit through the room while Lynn still stood near the door.

"Our firearms were drawn because you looked like you were more than ready to chop some people into pieces. I've seen the damage augmented people can cause with my own eyes. Do you have any good reasons, beside a cybernetic you're unused to, to keep me from requesting extradition?"
07 Sep 2016, 9:46pm
"Funny." He laughed. "Again, no one had any form of firearms raised until you two showed up, whipping out your boom sticks. Seems to me, you're the ones itching for a fight. What is it? Hmmmm..." He continued to smile.... "Wanting to provoke an incident so you can what? Prove something?"

He shifted in his bed. "Seriously, your going to go through all the legal rigamaroo to extradite me? Hardly. You have better things to do with your time then bind it all up in the sticky quagmire of legal proceedings. Even if it is Navy. Do you know exactly what would need to take place to have me transferred into your care? The cooperation of three..." He would raise three of his organic fingers. "THREE governmental systems...Good luck with that...."

He continued to smirk.

"Buuuuuut....."
08 Sep 2016, 12:25pm
"But? We're still listening, Mr. Aune. Do you have something to offer?" Lynn said a little less cold than usual.
08 Sep 2016, 2:34pm
Stryker continued with his smile. "Well...I can certainty understand how upsetting it would be to have a grenade lobbed at you. I would be right pissed as well if it were me. Let me make it up to you. An apology of sorts, say over dinner?" He would say to both women.
08 Sep 2016, 6:48pm
"Seems like most of 'em have gone to the bar. I Think I'll head there later myself after I'm done repairing my ship." Maniac said to himself as he walked back to his ship, wondering what that whole incident was about.

He entered his ship & started to make repairs on the cargo hatch & then moved on to the internal components. "Never have liked people touching my ship." he thought to himself. " Scanner said none of them were wanted, but seems that Stryker dude must have done something to piss those two women off."

He exited the HMS Valhalla & started to make his way towards the bar.
08 Sep 2016, 7:45pm
"We're on duty so we can't accept your offer to take us out to dinner. We'll accept your apology though." Rebecca smiled for the first time while she replied, then she looked down on her tablet.

"You're flying a federal dropship? Where'd you get it? My info says you were born in the Empire. Did you work for the Federal Auxiliary Navy?"
08 Sep 2016, 8:05pm
Stryker leans forward, still wearing that devilish and sexy grin, oddly juxtaposed, and maybe slightly ludicrousness against the hospital gown he is wearing.

"Work, work, work. You Feds are all the same. Do your duty, never have a bit of fun. Common, what's it's going to hurt if you ladies have a nice meal with me? Loosen up a bit, and I'll tell you all I know about that ship."

He would lean back putting his hands behind his head.
08 Sep 2016, 10:02pm
Rebecca smiled.

"Mr. Stryker, I'm willing to forget the little incident we had in the docks, if you run a little errand for us, but a dinner for two isn't in."
08 Sep 2016, 10:45pm
Stryker taps his chin for a moment. "Well, three is a crowd... There is enough of me to share, buuuut, I could totally see why you would want me all to yourself..." He would boast to Rebecca, "So, its settled. You, me, dinner at that nice Cantina there in the Habitation Complex, say at twenty hundred hours?"

He continues to smile. "Talk a little this, a little that, over some wine..."
09 Sep 2016, 9:55am
"Neither Commander White nor I are available for dinner, Mr. Aune. Like I already said, you'll fly an errand for us and we forget about the incident in the ...", the ringing of her communication terminal interrupted Rebecca. She pulled the earpiece out of it and plugged it into her ear. Jay, the communication officer of the FNV Angel of the End was on the other end of the line.

"Jay?"

"Ma'am, someone is trying to force access to our internal ship systems. As far as I know they already breached the security on the three vultures of our escort and are currently trying to break into the Angel."

"How long do we have until they're in?"

"They're not getting in anytime soon, Ma'am. Our FIS equipment for cyber warfare blows the usual military standard out of the water."

"Can you trace the hacker?"

"I can try but then they'll know that we've discovered them."

"Keep blocking them out until you receive new orders. I'll send Commander White back to the Angel."

"Yes, Ma'am."

Rebecca closed the comm line, then she turned back to Stryker. Her smile was gone. She gave Lynn a handsign and Lynn left the room to head back to the ship.

"Now, Mr. Aune. Are those people who are trying to hack into my ship by any chance your friends?"
09 Sep 2016, 2:39pm
An Asp with a few scorch marks on its hull casually flies into the docking area and lands. Ryan exits the craft after shutting it down and locking it up tight. He quickly heads for the tram, eager to avoid drawing attention.
09 Sep 2016, 3:01pm
Stryker sat back in the bed, listing to what Rebecca was about to offer, when she was interrupted by a inbound call.

"Jay?"

Stryker rolled his eyes.

"How long do we have until they're in?"

Well, that's not good... He thought.

"Can you trace the hacker?"

He raised a brow. She's seriously holding this conversation in front of me? Idiot.

"Keep blocking them out until you receive new orders. I'll send Commander White back to the Angel."

I seriously cannot believe this. Has she ever heard of discretion? I'd wager an acorn to an oak she's going to try an pin this on me....

"Now, Mr. Aune. Are those people who are trying to hack into my ship by any chance your friends?"

Aaaaaand, there it is.....

"You, know, you have me at a disadvantage," He started with,  "You know my legal name, my Federation Pilot's name, and yet I have no idea what your name is..."

He leans forward and crosses his arms on his lap.

"Now, I've been friendly. Amiable, actually, but this is starting to really piss me off." He said coolly.

"I was open and receptive to negotiation, but you would rather come in here, and wave your dicks around, trying to strong-arm me, and engage in blackmail....Which simply doesn't work for me. I tried to subtly tell you that, but I 'spose your the type of person that has to have everything spelled out for you. I mean granted," He shrugs dramatically,  "I understand that individual thinking is prohibited in your Federal navy.....  so let me make this plain as day for you... B L A C K M A I L D O E S N T W O R K. And quite frankly, I'm done with it. You had your chance.

Here's a bit of advice, you want to know who's hacking your ship? I'd advise you to start looking for transmitters planted around the landing pad. I have no fracking clue who would what whatever "super secret" information on those hard......."

He stopped talking for a second.

"Wait a sec........."

Thinking, he instinctively tap his chin with a mechanical talon accidentally ripping a small gash in the flesh accompanied with a wince.


Last edit: 09 Sep 2016, 8:16pm
09 Sep 2016, 8:14pm
Now it was Rebeccas turn to roll her eyes. The usual rant about the federal navy. Technically I'm not even in the navy, she thought for a moment and a small smile appeared on her face. The she focussed on Stryker again, who seemed to be reminded of something.

"Mr. Aune, if you want to see an ID you should ask. Have you remembered something?"

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