Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
10 Sep 2016, 11:47am
Marra looks up and eyes the agent coldly.

After a few moments, she turns to Stryker;

"You really asked her out to dinner?" she shakes her head, "Just stay put and stay quiet."

She looks back to the young woman, giving her a curt nod as she takes a few steps back.

Turning, she exits the room with Idris.

Once the doors close, Marra turns to the guards with a broad smile.
10 Sep 2016, 1:08pm
At this point a harassed looking doctor would pass Marra, and look up at them towering Idris. With a huff he pushes past him and the two guards.

Entering the room he would address Rebecca. "He's not going anywhere. Visiting hours are over. He is under my direct care and supervision, and will be until I see him fit for release, so you can contine your conversation out in the lobby. He needs rest." He would raise a hand indicating the door.
10 Sep 2016, 4:33pm
“Ship secure all system’s powered down. Welcome Commander”

With the ship secure and safely in the hangar Kodiack pulls off his helmet and take a deep breath.  He climbs out of the seat of his Imperial Eagle and stretched his sore muscles.  It was time for a break both for him and Fang. He had pushed her pretty hard thus far today. Over five jumps between different systems covering over 80 light years and it was still early in the day.  

Walking into the small cabin behind the cockpit Kodiack hangs up his helmet on the hook and grabbed his overcoat. Granted the station had environmental to help fight the coldness of space just outside the mail slot. Yet for him it was a bit chilly for him. Then again he was still getting use to the depth of space. Not to mention where or should he say when he was from was a bit warmer then it was here.

Stepping off his ship he was greeting by his docking bays Load Master. He followed the man to the cargo hatch where Kodiack pressed a button on his wrist mounted link to open the cargo bay of Fang.

“Alright just sign here and we’ll get you unloaded and fueled up.” The Load Master said handing him a pad.

“Thanks Chief.” Kodiack said taking the pad and putting his signature on the invoice.

“We should have you unloaded in about thirty minutes or so.”

“That's fine, I’ll leave her in your good hands.” He said patting the man on the back and heading into the docking area looking for a new job to run after a bit of a break.
10 Sep 2016, 6:27pm
"Very well."

Rebecca stepped behind Idris and Marra out of the room.
11 Sep 2016, 5:05pm
Marra's PDA chimes.

Her eyes narrow as she looks down at the screen;

***PRIORITY MESSAGE: D.DEVERRE***
RETURN TO TJAKIRI AT ONCE


She looks up at the Federal agent thoughtfully for a few moments, before beckoning to Idris; "Rydym yn gadael."

The pair march off down the corridor and out of the medical block, back to the docks area. As Marra ascends the boarding ramp of the Seren Du, Idris gestures to the armed guards around the ship. They follow their commander into the freighter and the ramp is raised.

Moments later, the ship is released from its moorings and makes a hasty exit from the station, returning to the lawless fringes of the Pegasi sector.
11 Sep 2016, 8:01pm
Stryker was amused, and annoyed all at the same time. He was having fun messing with Rebecca. He had no intention of ever going on a date, but hell it was worth a try. Marra's sudden arrival changed the dynamics, and if he was honest with himself, he was curious as to the job the Federal Captain had offered him. Maybe the driving motivation was his recent distaste with the Empire. He wasn't about to do the job to secure his freedom. Blackmail wasn't a motivatining force. He wasn't sure what it was in this case. He probably would have done it if she just asked, of course there were provisions.

He asked the doctor.

"Hey, I want to talk to the Federal Captain, Give me few minutes."

The doctor rolled his eyes turned and went to gain Rebecca's attention.


Last edit: 11 Sep 2016, 8:10pm
11 Sep 2016, 8:18pm
Rebecca looked at the leaving pair as the doctor who'd sent her out of the room earlier, tapped on her shoulder.

"He wants to talk with you again."

Wordless she turned around and entered the room again.

"Mr. Aune?"
11 Sep 2016, 8:22pm
"Sorry about that; earlier I mean. I was just being an asshat." He would shrug his broad shoulders. "Look if your going to extradite me, your going to extradite me. I am curious as to your earlier offer."
11 Sep 2016, 8:24pm
Rebecca smiled.

"Mr. Aune, which rank do you currently hold in the Federal Auxiliary Navy?"
11 Sep 2016, 8:29pm
"First, can I get your name?"

He would pause for a moment.

"I have no affiliation with the Federal Navy."
11 Sep 2016, 8:36pm
Rebecca pulled her ID out and held it infront of Stryker.

"Well, getting a rank in the Federal Auxiliary Navy would enable you to buy a Federal Assault Ship as well as the Federal Gun Ship after a certain rank. The contract I'd offer would require you to discreetly bring an amount of cargo and personnel to a certain planet in the federal border region."
11 Sep 2016, 8:38pm
He would sit back.
"I'm listening..."
11 Sep 2016, 8:48pm
"Let's just say, it is a job which shouldn't be done by any officials connected to the Federal Navy. As independent pilot you're ideal. You'll get the details once I know if you accept or not."
11 Sep 2016, 8:50pm
"You got yourself a pilot, given one condition." He would lean his bulky body forward.
11 Sep 2016, 8:52pm
"And what's the condition?"

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