Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

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6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
29 Nov 2016, 7:07pm
Reiffis listened in carefully to his words and nodded. "People are very unpleasant, unless for keeping ones bed warm at night." he joked.

Once the lift stopped he patted Phisto on the shoulder as he exited "Enjoy your 'Vacation' Catch you over at the bar later, hopefully we will both have a beautiful woman hanging off us."

He parted ways from Phisto and made his way to the rendezvous location.
29 Nov 2016, 7:16pm
Heading from the elevator, Phisto suddenly spun around and continued backward, calling back to the lift, raising his right hand high in the air in greeting,

"My apologies, sir!  We never exchanged names.  I'm Phisto.  Pleased to meet you."
29 Nov 2016, 7:56pm
He turned to face Phisto once more and extended his hand in greeting.

"The names Reiffis, Commander of the ISS Pegasus. Trader. A pleasure to have met you Phisto." he replied with a smile. He though it best not to mention he held the title of Lord within the Empire. He didn't need to make enemies here.
29 Nov 2016, 9:37pm
Luke3107"Oh goody, I get to hit you at last!" Liith said jokingly, "I was thinking more of an ice pack to turn your cheek red with the cold, and maybe tear some clothes you don't care for. Throw some water over you to seem sweaty."

Shifting a bit on the chair, she began cracking her knuckles anyway then added,

"But if you really want a black eye, it would certainly relieve some of my stress." She added with a tongue in cheek tone, "I'd rather not cause you permanent damage, unless you give me reason to of course..."


"Yeah, your idea seems a lot less painful - thought these will be medics, and they might see through an iced cheek and some soaked hair." He nodded to her. "Worth a shot at any rate."

As they went back to the forward cabin to grab the necessary things to make the illusion work, he stopped off at the hangar bay and grabbed a second low-profile earpiece. It was a small thing, something that stuck to the inside of the ear canal, flush against the skin so that it wouldn't immediately stand out upon inspection. He passed it to Lilith, nodding towards it. 

"If anything happens, Bloodfeather will be in your ear. If for some reason we get separated or we need to coordinate our actions, Blood can give us directions. Sound good?"
29 Nov 2016, 10:27pm
"Well we can go for painful and convincing, or take a chance to save messing up your pretty face." Lilith said stickng out her tongue as she took the earpiece. She was trying to squeeze whatever enjoyment she could from the situation to keep her nerves at bay.

Inserting the earpiece into her ear she began talking quietly and looking shiftily at Isaiah.

"Right, now you can tell me those secrets in peace Bloodfeather." She said quietly, but loud enough for him to hear.

"Really?? Well that's interesting... You don't say.... Oh come on, that's just disgusting!!!" She kept uttering. Of course a Bloodfeather hadn't said a word but she was enjoying trying to wind him up.


Last edit: 30 Nov 2016, 12:08am
29 Nov 2016, 10:43pm
Running down the ramp to the Bloodfeather's landing pad was an individual garbed in the white uniform of a medic. The face was half covered with a splash shield and a white cap covered the head. The Medic was pushing a statis pod and seemed to be out of breath. Along with the medic was a single medic drone

They came to a stop. "I...I...." The medic huffed and puffed...."There is....is an emergency.....where?"


Last edit: 29 Nov 2016, 11:32pm
29 Nov 2016, 10:43pm
Isaiah tapped his ear, shaking his head matter of factly. "I can hear her too, smart one." He couldn't help but be at least a little amused by her antics; like Lilith, he was running on nerves now. Knowing they couldn't waste any more time, he went back to the fridge and retrieved an ice pack, holding it to his cheek. He closed the door and sat down in a chair, growing quiet and contemplative.

"When the medics get here, let me do the talking. There's an access panel on the left side of the cargo bay that you can remove and hide in if they board the ship. After this blows over, we'll make our move on Glaboski at the nightclub."
29 Nov 2016, 11:12pm
"Sorry about this..." Lilith said, wandering over to him.

She reached up to his sleeve shoulder and tugged hard, tearing the seam before ruffling his otherwise clean cut hairdo.

"Gotta make it look good... The offer of a slap is still there otherwise." She added cheekily before taking her place in the chair again.

"Bloodfeather, presumably you'll tell me if the Medic goes to head up the access ramp? I'll need at least..." She thought for a moment about the layout of her previously owned Fer-De-Lance, "30 seconds to get from here to the access hatch. Make it 45 seconds if you can, might need time to put the hatch back in place."


Last edit: 29 Nov 2016, 11:51pm
30 Nov 2016, 12:21am
The medic held his knees panting. Trying to catch breath. The medic drone buzzed around. "Can't.....can't go..." Huff puff.... " go in there without clearance....not safe...." He pointed to entrance of the ship amd the drone buzzed up the ramp.
30 Nov 2016, 1:41am
"They're just outside," Bloodfeather informed the two of them. "And they've sent a drone up the ramp."

"Showtime," Isaiah said, taking Lilith by the shoulders, hoping to make a point. "Be calm. We'll get through this, alright?" 

He placed the icepack he'd been holding on the table, then shuffled out of the forward cabin to be greeted by the medical drone. He froze, then put on his best indignant expression and pointed angrily at it. "Get the fuck off my ship!" he shouted, marching towards it. 
30 Nov 2016, 3:23am
The medic drone made a noise and complied with Isaiah's demand. In its synthesized voice it made an apology.

"Yes sir." And darted back down the ramp. It hovered next to the sole medic, who looked back up at the ship and called out.

"Oh for the love of...." And the medic rolled his eyes. "I was told there was a medical emergency. So help me, if this a prank or another false alarm..."

The medic stood there for a moment. "Fine," and threw thier arms up before carting the statis pod back down the ramp mumbling under his breath.

"I'm so sick of this.... stupid idiots.....send one medic, I should have known...." And disappeared around a corner with drone in tow.
30 Nov 2016, 6:36am
Isaiah watched from the ramp as the drone and the medic departed.

That was... easier than I thought. Huh. 

He looked around the bay cautiously, walking down the ramp to get a better vantage. Apart from a few crates strewn about, he couldn't see anything else.

Still, something about it didn't sit well with him. One medic? Not a team of them? The hairs on the back of his neck stood on end - he got that sinking feeling in his gut that there was more going on.

He turned around and started back up the ramp.
30 Nov 2016, 3:58pm
Lilith sat in the chair, adrenaline pumping as her fight or flight instincts kicked in at the mention of the drone coming aboard. She took some comfort from Isaiahs confidence as he stepped out the cabin to confront the intruder.

For Lilith, fight or flight usually meant fight. She detested the thought of not facing your foe head on. As a result, it was taking all her self control not to march out the door and confront the intruder herself. Then she heard Isaiahs voice echo down the hall, and she waited for sounds of resistance, or shouting, or something... But there was nothing.

Something didn't sit right with her about that. If a medic knows of an emergency, he or she is obliged to do everything in their power to help. Even on the off chance Glaboski sent someone clued up to the situation, they would fight to get aboard right?

"Uhh... Bloodfeather? What's going on?" She asked tentatively, standing slowly and making her way to the door. What if Isaiah had been playing her all along and they're all on their way up here now?

She reached out to the keypad, frowning as she tried to recall the code he'd given her... *4868? No... 4285? Goddamit...!!!* each time she tried, she was given a flash of red and an error message. At this point she was beginning to feel certain Isaiah had given her a false code. The anger welling up inside her not helping her memory in the slightest.
30 Nov 2016, 6:01pm
Dr. Glaboski strode along the docks. He passed the medic that he sent out to help with the medical emergency.
The medic looked at him. "Pah, they didn't even want me on the ship. I single fella had a few choice words for me, and told me to piss off."

Dr. Glaboski nodded. "What did he look like?"

"A bruised face. Looks like he knocked it on something, or was in a fight. Hardly an emergency..." The medic scowled.

"Dr. Glaboski smiled. "I was told it was an emergency. I apologize for sending you down here. My guess is, illegal substances are involved. Would explain the irrational behavior....." He continued to walk towards the ship.

The medic laid a hand on the doctors shoulder. "I wouldn't go up there. He looked right pissed, and if drugs are involved...who knows what will happen.

The doctor looked at him. "I'll tell you what, I'll go up there, just to make sure everything is okay. If I don't report to you in, say, 30 minutes, call station security. Will that be sufficient?"

The medic nodded. "I don't like it. I think it would be best to have some sec..."

"I think," the doctor interrupted, "Bringing security in right now might exacerbate the situation. If people really are hurt and drugs are involved, it would be best to be as non-threatening as possible. Thirty minutes, clear?"

The medic nodded. "Clear."

"Good." The doctor said as he turned the corner and made his way up to the Bloodfeather.
30 Nov 2016, 7:31pm
"4845," Bloodfeather said to Lilith, almost quietly. "Wait until he gives the all-clear though."

Isaiah turned around at the sound of footsteps echoing across the bay. Damn. He started to descend the ramp again to confront whoever else was tagging along.

"What's the problem? Did I not make myself clear?"

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