Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
11 Apr 2019, 4:19pm
Maul was asleep in his cabin after a rough session with the auto-doc. The pain he was having in his ribs had reduced immensely but he was still slightly sore.

He wakes up to the sound of an alarm going off and half hears Khelan shouting for him to man the guns.

"You got it boss!" Maul shouts as he attempts to rush around in a groggy state.

He runs to the cockpit and and flops down into the co-pilot seat and deploys hardpoints.

"Bastard ruined my sleep." Maul mutters angrily.

He looks at Khelan with a serious face.

"We blasting this fool or hightailing it? You give me the word and I'll open fire."
11 Apr 2019, 5:44pm
Khelan shouts over at Maul while throwing the Prid into a series of corkscrews and rapid velocity changes in an attempt to shake the pirate.

"well ah dunno, ah wis thinkin aboot invitin him over fur tea and cakes, but yer ideas better!"

Laser blasts reflect in his mirrored glasses and Khelan's mouth becomes a thin line with concentration.

A loud shriek fills the inside of the cockpit

"Shields offline" comes the calm voice of Leo.

"Basturds goat a plasma accelerator, he's goat us ootgunned and manoeuvred and he knows it. He's playin wi us"

"All this can be over if you just give me your cargo"

Khelan reaches over and flips the comms

"Attention Fer-De-lance, ye win ye can hiv wits in ma hold just stop shooting at me, let me hiv ma life ah'm beggin ye"

"You're pathetic, now empty your cargo"

"Ah will, ah will, just gie me a few minutes, ma cargo hatch is fucked ah'll need tae suit up and open it manually"

"You have five minutes or I'll turn you into dust"

Khelan looks to Maul

"No a word, now take the conn. Ah'll be in the cargo hauld, be ready tae hit the gas the moment ah dump the cargo"

Khelan grabs his remlock helmet and storms out of the cockpit
11 Apr 2019, 6:33pm
Maul takes the controls and waits for Khelan to dump the cargo.

While waiting, he cant help but feel useless and helpless.

Suddenly, he spawns an idea.

He runs to his cabin and unstraps his backpack from its secured place then continues to the cargo hold.

"Khelan! Wait!" He shouts whilst running towards him.

"We may be outgunned and maneuvered but fuck these guys." He says while rummaging through his pack of goods he bought from the blackmarket.

"We outsmart them." He says while holding up a small makeshift explosive with a huge smile.

"I bought this just in case we needed it for the job but I say we dump some cargo with this bad boy attached, set a timer on it, let them scoop it and blow their cargo hold to hell."

"Yeah, we still lose the cargo but we can teach these fuckers a lesson and destroy whatever else they have in their hold."

He kneels down to inspect the cargo and see where best to place the explosive.

He looks up at Khelan with a smug smile.

"This will show them not to fuck with The Prid."
11 Apr 2019, 7:15pm
Khelan smiles at Maul

"Ye read ma mind"

He goes on to explain

"That dumb basturd hasnae scanned us, if he hid he'd have blasted us tae dust the moment yer warrant came ontae his screen and we widnae be havin this conversation"

"He'd also hiv noticed that the Prid's haulin mare than a couple of tons of explosives and noticed ah wis stallin fur time tae arrange a wee surprise fur him"

Khelan takes the detonator from Maul

"Ah wis just gonnae fling an overloadin power cell intae the pod an run as soon as we dumped the pods bit yer way buys us a bitta extra time"

Khelan passes Maul his remlock helmet

"Ye can dae the honours, let me know win yer ready an Ah'll dump the pods"

He starts back to the cockpit and turns back for a moment

"Ye might wanna turn up yer maglocks afore ye gie me the signal, jus sayin like"

"Leo shunt all extra power intae the engines an plot a course fur the nearest system, ah dinnae care who or wit runs it as lang as it's no here"
11 Apr 2019, 8:01pm
Maul wires the explosives and double checks them.

He puts on the helmet, turns up his maglocks and grabs a nearby pipe to hold on to.

"Alright Khelan, let's do this!" He yells as he opens the cargo hold.


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11 Apr 2019, 9:10pm
The Fer-de-lance approachs the battered old python it's cargo scoop opened like the mouth of some terrible creature further emphasised by the prominent shark mouth paint job on the front of the ship.

Khelan releases the cargo pods containing the "surprise" and the pirate ship moves in to claim its reward.

"Haud on this is gonna git bumpy" he yells as he hits full power and the afterburners at the same time causing the ships engines to howl and the python to leap forward.

The first of the cargo pods vanish into the hold of the pirate ship and it starts to turn to bring its guns to bear on the fleeing python.

"Guess what? I lied when I said I'd spare you. Do you really think I'd let a snivelling coward like you live to see another day?"

Khelan throws the ship into an immelman turn causing him to be face to face with the pirate before shooting over the top of the enemy ship.

"Leo!!! Get us oota here pronto!!"

"Frame Shift Drive charging, jump in 15 seconds"

The Fer-de-lance lazily turns after the prid to bring its guns to bear

"You're already dead, you just don't know it yet!"

"Jump in 10 seconds"

Shots screech off the hull of the prid, glancing blows not enough to cause any real damage.

"Jump in 5 seconds"

an alarm screeches in the cockpit

"Warning, cargo bay door open unable to jump"

Khelan slaps the cargo control panel to shut the door hitting it repeatedly in a vain attempt to speed it up.

More screeching from the hull as more shots hit home

Silence......

Khelan glances at the rear view monitor and sees the Fer-de-lance shaking before orange and yellow flames blossom out of the ship followed by a massive explosion and the pirate vanishes from view.

In the darkness several flashing lights twinkle... Cargo pods that have somehow managed to survive the demise of the vessel they were on.

"Leo, cancel frame shift"

"Frame shift cancelled"

"Well that wis fun, Maul wen yer finished playin wi yersel doon in the cargo hauld git up here and we'll see wit that bhoy wis carryin"
11 Apr 2019, 9:52pm
Maul opens his eyes. He was surprised to see he was still alive. He double checks to make sure his backpack didn't fly off his back and makes his way to his cabin to secure it in a safe place. He then proceeds to the cockpit.

He quietly sits back down in the co-pilot seat.

"Uh, here is your helmet back." Maul says while reaching it over to Khelan and while still slightly shaking.

"I, uh, I think we should get that cargo hatch looked at sometime. You know, just for peace of mind."

He clears his throat and attempts to regain his composure while focusing on the loot the pirate ship had dropped.

"After all that, this guy better have had something good."

He wipes the sweat from his face, relaxes into his chair and stares out of the canopy.


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11 Apr 2019, 10:30pm
Khelan gives his trademark grin at Maul

"There's fuck all wrang the hatch mate, ah just needed tae buy a bit a time tae git they pods rigged, that's all. The Prid might look like a piece of shite but she's well sorted mechanically. Tho speakin of that we better pit in somewhere tae get her checked over. Just tae be oan the safe side."

"Man ye look like ye need clean underwear an maybe a wee lie doon in a darkened room."

Khelan turns his attention to the comms panel and taps a couple of buttons.

"Leo transfer 30% of that eejits bounty when we claim it tae Maul wid ye?"

"Affirmative commander transfer 26000 standard credits to Maul Montresor upon successful claiming of bounty arranged"

Khelan looks over the scanner reading of the pods.

"Narcotics, bit of target practice fur ye there mate. Junk, junk, junk..... Helloooo there beautiful."

"Leo droap the cargo scoop and gimme manual"

He turns to Maul a big grin on his face

"Twatty McTwatface here left us a wee present a ton of diamonds! That'll pay tae fix the holes in the Prid"

He swings the ship around and skillfully scoops up the diamonds before checking the galaxy map.

"Leo, set course fur Facece wid ye? Time tae git the Prid patched up again."

He looks at Maul and sees how pale and shaken he looks.

"Mate, If yer gonna hurl wid ye mind goin and daeing it doon the toilet? Ah don't want the cockpit stinkin a puke"
11 Apr 2019, 11:23pm
Maul is slouched over in his seat and shaking his head.

"Ah, I'll be fine. I've just never been in a situation like that before. I'm used to sitting down when maneuvers like that are pulled and, you know, not standing near an open cargo hatch."

He sits back up in his seat and looks at Khelan.

"And thanks for that by the way. The bounty I mean. That's something that I'm actually not used to. Not having a single credit to my name or even knowing if I still have a ship when I get back home. It can make a person feel useless. Ya know?"

Maul let's out a sigh of relief before snapping his attention back to Khelan.

"Wait, hold on a second, did you just say the hatch is fine? What the hell was I down there for? I was under the impression that it needed to be opened manually! You could have told me that!" He says as he stands up pointing back towards the cargo hold.
12 Apr 2019, 9:23am
Khelan laughs heartily

"Ah coulda but Ah'll be honest wi ye, ah didnae wanna ruin yer fun. Seein ye stood there lookin all determind an stuff, ah thought tae maself" lit the bhoy have sum fun"

Khelan gets up and slaps Maul on the back

"Yer a good man Maul Montresor, it's like ma creepy auld uncle Albert used tae say" if ye wanna see the measure of a bloke, scare the everloving shite outta him and see wit he does" course he a total heidcase who wis convinced that his ship wis hauntid by the ghost of a chicken, nae joke he used tae leave wee piles of burdseed lying aroond the place tae try an appease it, he always wis a bit of a weird wan but sometimes he gave good advice."

"Leo, how long till we git tae Facece?"

"At current speed approximately 5 hours commander"

"Magic, autopilot till we're just ootside scannin range then gies a shout, Ah've just goat tae a good bit in ma show Captain Picard's been turnt intae wan of they borg bastards and it's up tae that beardy prick Riker tae save the day."

Khelan goes into his cabin and sits down on his bed.

"Too close mate" he says to himself "D'ye want tae die oot here in the black ya stupid fucker?"

Khelan shakes his head and lies back on his bunk his breath trembling slightly.

"Leo turn the telly oan wid ye?"
12 Apr 2019, 5:34pm
Maul stands there silently as he watches Khelan leave the cockpit.

"That bastard." He says to himself with a smile.

He laughs and sits back down in the co-pilot seat to stare out at the stars.

"Yer a good man Maul Montresor"


These words repeat in his head like a broken record.

"Then why don't I feel like I am?" He says out loud before noticing no one is around to hear him.

He shakes his head while sighing then stands up and goes back to the kitchen area to grab another bottle of milk.

Maul leans against a wall and slowly scoots down into a sitting position while drinking and thinking about his past.

He let's the low hum resonating from the ship put him to sleep.
12 Apr 2019, 10:59pm
"Attention commander, we're approaching Facece, ETA 10 minutes"

Khelan slowly opens his eyes, he'd fell asleep at some point in the last few hours and couldn't remember when. Leo had thoughtfully turned off the monitor he'd been using to watch his ancient TV show on.

"When did ah pass oot?" he asks groggily

"Aproximately 4 hours and 27 minutes ago commander"

Khelan blinks a few times and sits up on his bunk, shaking his head to try and clear the last remnants of sleep from his mind.

"I've taken the liberty of providing you with a cup of Tea commander"

"Leo, ah cud kiss ye ye know that? But after that time at lhs 246 when ah made a tit o' maself fallin in love wi the stations docking control computer ah vowed tae only fall fur people ah've actually met"

"Very good Commander, am I to assume that Princess Aisling Duval will be joining us in the near future then?

Khelan chortled, Leo might only be a virtual intelligence but sometimes he could be a right bastard in pointing out the flaws in his logic.

Khelan gets up from his bunk and wanders out into the corridor of the Python sipping his tea heading towards the cockpit. Passing the galley he notices Maul passed out against the wall.

"Oi, sleeping beauty!" he shouts "Time tae wake up it's time tae git ye into Facece withoot us gettin blown tae kingdom come by station security win they scan us, ye've goat five minutes tae git yersel up tae the cockpit and get kitted up"

Without waiting for the response Khelan walks into the cockpit and slips into his chair.
13 Apr 2019, 1:06am
Maul jumps a bit at the sound of Khelan's voice and wipes some drool off his face.

"Alright, gimme just a second!" He yells with a slurred voice still clearly half asleep.

He slowly gets up and makes his way to his cabin to grab his kit. He sits on the bed with his arms wrapped around his backpack and his eyes closed to think for a moment.

"Don't mess this up. It's not just your life on the line here. Someone else is involved. Get this over with and take your toxic miserable life and move on. Don't spread the toxicity to others." He thinks to himself.

He pulls a pistol out of his backpack and checks the clip.

"You never know." Maul says then lets out a sigh before putting it back.

He stands up and straps the backpack tightly around him and walks to the cockpit to see Khelan sitting in his chair.

He sits on the edge of the co-pilot seat. He sits leaning forward resting his elbows on his knees with his fingers interlaced.

Maul looks to Khelan and attempts to make some small talk to take his mind off of whats coming.

"Hey man, how was your show?"


Last edit: 13 Apr 2019, 1:17am
13 Apr 2019, 7:59am
Khelan takes a sip of his tea
"Nae clue mate, ah passed oot as soon as ah lay doon. Ah musta needed ma beauty sleep."

He thinks for a few seconds

"The way ah see it, we need tae dock tae git the Prid patched up. An we hiv a wanted fugitive oan board. So we hiv three choices, we hit silent runnin, pop a heat sink an blast intae the station at full welly an pray we git doon intae the hanger afor they scan us."

"Oar we fly in actin all casual an hope they dinnae look too close. Ye never know it might wurk."

"Oar we pop ye intae a cargo pod wi as much o2 as possible, spit ye oot an hope ye either dinnae get scooped up by someone else oar run oota o2 before ah git back tae ye"

He looks to Maul

"Your call mate"
13 Apr 2019, 4:43pm
Maul drops his head and looks at the floor for a moment and then looks to Khelan.

"I say we try silent running. It's worked for smugglers before so maybe it will work for us."

"After that pirate attack back there, I trust your flying skills." Maul says with a nod.

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