Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

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1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

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We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

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If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
04 May 2019, 4:52pm
Khelan smiles

"As plans go it's a wee bit better than dippin yer wee man intae honey and waggling it at a passin grizzly bear but no much. But it's the oanly plan ye've goat at the moment so it's better than nothing"

"Ah say first we get ye checked oot by Shin an his bhoys, secondly we go see if yer krait's even where ye think ye left it although ah guarantee ye that if it's still sittin there it'll be gettin watched so Ah might move that aboot in the plan later oan. Thirdly we find oot just wit the fuck's happenin wi this corporation if they still even exist and who's callin the shots if they dae. Then ye can either go in there all guns blazin an hope ye dinnae die oar we dae it smart, gather as much Intel as we can aboot them and find oot exactly where the folk that wronged ye are likely tae be an then ye shove a large plasma accelerator up their bahookie and pull the trigger "
04 May 2019, 6:18pm
Maul smirks and nods as he listens to Khelan.

"I can guarantee one thing. Whoever is calling the shots, they probably weren't expecting me to meet a crazy Scotsman, let alone befriend him." Maul says jokingly,

"We'll take them down or die trying. No more running, no more hiding and....no more Mr. Nice Guy."

Maul chuckles and looks at Khelan.

"Sorry, that last bit reminded me of some old classic tune I heard recently. It started coming out and I couldn't stop myself."

He clears his throat.

"But seriously, the worst they can do at this point is kill me. That's the only hand they've ever tried to play and I'm over it. This time we outplay them."
04 May 2019, 10:27pm
Khelan looks deadly serious for a moment

"Ah'm no crazy, ma mother hid me testid"

A small tone plays in the cockpit.

"Leo, wit the fuck wis that?"

"It's to let you know that the cargo hold has been emptied commander." responds Leo

"Aw ummm right well time tae start pre-flight then."

"Already done commander, the anaconda series of vessels comes with an automated pre-flight sequence as standard."

He looks over to Maul.

"Those fdl guys thoughta everythin Ah'm startin tae wunner if the only reason the ship needs a commander is folk wid loose their shite aboot a totally automated vessel flyin aroon the black? "

"Leo take care of the launch then"

"Acknowledged commander, auto-launch in progress."

The massive vessel lifts slowly off the landing pad, sits in a queue to leave the station for a few moments and then smoothly exits out the mailslot into the blackness of space.
Khelan checks the nav comp and reprograms it to take the reduced weight into consideration and smiles as it's taken several jumps off the trip.

"Right matey let's get ye checked oot an go find these airseholes."

Khelan activates the frameshift drive and the anaconda jumps to witchspace heading towards the next star system on the way to Hondo City.
06 May 2019, 12:44am
Maul smiles at Khelan.

"Ah, you know I was just kidding about the "crazy" thing. The same can't be said for your uncle though."

He sits quiet for a moment.

"So this Shin fella you keep mentioning, is he the guy running the show over at Hondo City?"
06 May 2019, 12:03pm
Khelan grins and laughs a bit.

"Relax mate Ah'm just messin wi ye."

"As fur Shin well he kinda does run things but no official like if ye get ma drift? His title is Sho-Sa, that means major by the way Shin Yodama he's ex military incase ye couldnae tell. Unofficially he's Oyabun Yodama of the Black Dragon Society but ye dinnae wanna go shoutin that aroond an he's no a bloke ye wanna cross unless yer fond o no breathin."

"Ah spent a wee bitty time in Hondo City a while ago haulin cargo back n forth between there an a wee place called Turtle Bay. Ah didnae know ah wis haulin Yak supplies an shite like that between the two ports until wan day ah landed back in Hondo City an a buncha bhoys frae the system authority were waitin tae hiv a wee word wi me."

"Either Ah managed tae convince them that Ah hid nae clue wit Ah wis haulin oar Shin pulled a few strings tae get me oot but Ah wis released wi-oot charge. Ah goat oot side the copshop an a cupple of his bhoys wur waiting fur me. They took me tae take me tae hiv a wee wurd wi their boss. Ah thought Ah wis toast but he already knew Ah hidnae said anything tae the cops an it turnt oot he wanted tae apologise fur gettin me intae bother. See these bhoys hiv a system of honour and part a that is ye dinnae cause any hassle tae the little guy an ma gettin "detained" caused me a bitta hassle so he wis honour bound tae apologise."

"So anyway we hid a cuppla drinks, the fact Ah kept ma mouth shut wi the cops really impressed him an he asked me tae dae a wee joab fur him, runnin a cupple o folk tae Luthien. The pay wis gud an he needed somewan no really known tae anywan else so Ah said aye OK"

"Ah did that an came back, turns oot the folk Ah had taken wis his daughter who wis goin tae sign some peace treaty oar another wi another Yak group."

He pauses and takes a drink.

"So Ah did a few wee joabs fur him, hid a few laughs, did some shite Ah'm no proud an Ah'm no gonnae tell ye aboot because it's ancient history as fur as Ah'm concerned an Ah earned a few innerestin tattoos intae the bargain. It wis fun y'know? Well maistly. But Ah never really felt at home bein the only wit they call gaijin in the group, so time came tae move oan an he wis very unnerstandin an wis very sorry tae see me go yadda yadda an if ah ever needed a favour gie him a wee shout. That night Ah wis in a bar waiting fur the Prid tae get loaded up, playin cairds wi a cupple of guys frae some tech company, they lost heavily tae me an we struck a deal tae upgrade the ships systems and ma eye as ye know. Ah know it wis a wee leavin present frae Shin but he didnae wanna admit it so Ah left it at that."

"Anyway he's a dangerous but good bloke an wan of the few folk ah trust oot here in the black."


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06 May 2019, 8:18pm
Maul nods as he listens to Khelan.

"Shin sounds like a pretty decent guy, considering the life he leads. It really does say something about a person when they can live that sort of life and still be respectable. Sometimes good people just have to do bad shit and that doesn't make them inherently bad. It's not always so black and white out here. That's how I feel anyway."

Maul goes silent for a moment.

"But damn, I didn't know you had such a history with these guys. You reckon you'll be okay going back there?"
06 May 2019, 9:49pm
Khelan nods.

"Ah'll be fine, trust me mate. It's been a cuppla years but he's yer best bet."

The massive anaconda jumps into the system and Khelan sets course for Hondo City Station.

Khelan turns to Maul.

"Time tae get ye checked oot matey!"
06 May 2019, 11:05pm
Maul turns to Khelan.

"Yeah, I'm ready to finally get all of this sorted out."

Maul stands up and walks towards the elevator to leave the cockpit.

"I'm going to go ahead and grab my gear. Shouldn't need it but I feel naked without it. I'll try to hurry and meet you by the access elevator."

Maul takes the elevator down to the habitation area. He enters his cabin, grabs his backpack and pulls his pistol out.

"I don't think these guys would be too keen to the idea of a stranger walking in packing heat."

He shoves the pistol back into the cabinet his backpack was in and straps his backpack around him.

"Alright, let's do this."

Maul leaves his cabin and starts walking towards the access elevator.
07 May 2019, 10:09am
The Prid drops out of supercruise at Hondo City and Khelan smiles at the sight of the Orbis station.

"Hullo auld friend it's gud tae see ye again."

He flicks open the comm channel.

"Anaconda Whisky Tango Foxtrot, Prid of Ankh-Morpork to flight control requesting docking clearance."

A female voice comes over the comms

"Flight control to Anaconda Whisky Tango Foxtrot, Clearance granted proceed to landing pad 01. It's great to see you again commander. Clearance has been granted for auto dock when you're ready."

Khelan engages the docking computer, gets up from the commanders chair and heads out of the cockpit while the station and the anaconda take care of docking procedures.

He sees Maul waiting at the access elevator.

" Ah'll be a cuppla minutes, Ah've just goat tae pick up a cuppla wee things frae ma cabin."

He pauses for a second.

"See yer gear? Make sure it's turnt aff before we go in tae see Shin, He values his privacy so make sure ye've nae snooping devices wi ye unless ye want them rammed so far up yer airse they tickle yer tonsils an fur the love of god make sure yer no packin any heat."

He continues into his cabin without waiting for a reply and quickly strips out of his flightsuit and into Jeans, a red T-shirt reading "London Jets Roof Attack" and a black bomber style jacket. He pulls on his mag lock boots again and checks his reflection in the mirror.

He pulls out a small case from under the bed, checks the contents, puts his mirrored shades on to hide his eye and walks out of his cabin carrying the case.
07 May 2019, 6:13pm
Maul double checks his gear while waiting for Khelan.

"Mmm yep, all good here." He thinks to himself.

After a few minutes he sees Khelan walk out of his cabin wearing his new clothes.

"Damn dude, looking fresh!" Maul says, smiling at Khelan.

"You're looking like that and I'm over here in my fucked up flight suit with a pair of damn pants over it. I used to have a yellow jacket at one point, no clue where that is now though."

He laughs as he flails his leg showing that some of the straps on his boot are broken.

"Seriously though, nice."

He reaches out for a fist bump.

"You ready to do this shit?"


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07 May 2019, 8:18pm
Khelan bumps Maul's fist.

"Let's go see the auld man."

He leads Maul through the commercial plaza and down into a side street towards a small shop with the sign "Yodama's Curios and More" above it.

Two large heavily tattooed men approach as they get closer.

"We're closed, go back to the plaza!" grunts the first one.

"Ah'm expectid" replies Khelan.

"And I told you that we're closed, are you deaf or just stupid?"

The second man moves around to flank Maul, cracking his neck as he moves.

Khelan slides up the left sleeve of his jacket revealing an intricate pattern of reds, greens, golds and black.

"And Ah telt ye Ah'm expectid. Noo stick yer heid in the door an tell whoever's in there that Bukimina ojisan arubāto is ootside."

The first man steps back and up to the door of the shop, he talks to someone inside and turns back to Khelan and Maul.

"You can go in, please accept my apologies." he grunts at the pair.

Khelan walks past and mutters "Kuso baka" at the first man.

He walks into the darkened shop and turns to Maul.

"Sorry aboot that mate, they fuckin kobun's need tae learn some manners."

Khelan points to a couple of pairs of slippers outside the door to the back of the shop.

"Shoes aff mate an stick those oan instead, we're enterin the man's hoose"
07 May 2019, 9:00pm
Maul is clearly a bit nervous and stays silent as Khelan handles the situation.

He follows Khelan inside and slips his boots off to slide on the slippers.

"Well, that was nerve wracking. I didn't understand half of what was being said back there. What did you even say to those guys?" Maul says quietly to Khelan.
07 May 2019, 10:34pm
Khelan smiles his infectious smile

"Relax mate all ye need tae know is they guys ootside are eejits an Ah telt them as much.

A voice from the other side of the door calls "Enter!" and Khelan walks in motioning Maul to follow him.

Inside sits an old man cross legged on the floor with two guards standing at the back of the room at either side .

Khelan stands before the old man and bows in respect, motioning Maul to do the same.

"Kon'nichiwa Yodama San" he says as he raises from the bow.

The old man slowly stands up and bows in return.

"Kon'nichiwa Khelan San"

"Allow me tae introduce Maul...."

"Maul Montresor" the old man interrupts "You are keeping some strange company these days Khelan, I know who this man is and what he has done. But one thing eludes me and that is why you are both stood here before me?"

Khelan smiles

"He's told me about whit he has done an that he wis fitted up by some seriously nasty folk tae take oot the heid of a rival narcotics corporation." Khelan almost spits out the word narcotics and the disgust at the word is evident on Shins face too.

"When he foon oot the truth he tried in his ain crack-handed way tae fix things an took oot the heid of the corporation he used tae work fur. Oanly Ah suspect that he wis bein used by other folk who want the market fur themselves."

Shin listens to Khelan explain Maul's story.

"And you believe him?" he asks

"Ah do" Khelan says with a nod "He's a gud man, a wee bitty fucked in the hied by wit he's been telt by other people but Ah believe his story and Ah trust him."

Shin looks over Maul.

"If you trust him then so do I, Maul Montresor on behalf of Black Dragon Society I welcome you to Hondo City."
07 May 2019, 11:09pm
Maul starts to stick his hand out to shake the mans hand before bringing it back and bowing instead.

"Oh, I almost forgot!" Maul says as he slides his data slate out of his pocket to read the greeting Khelan told him back on the ship.

"Um, Anata no okasan wa jigoku de chin powo suu" Maul says with a proud smile.

Maul notices Shin looks slightly angry and confused.

"Uh, sorry, did I say it wrong?"

Maul looks at Khelan and shrugs while silently mouthing the word "sorry".
08 May 2019, 12:15am
Khelan bursts out laughing and Shin suddenly realises what's going on and joins in.

"You haven't changed, have you Khelan?" he asks

"Wit can Ah say? Ah'm a sucker fur the classics"

Shin looks to Maul.

"Incase you were wondering Khelan got you to inform me that my mother performs fellatio in Hades. A favourite trick if his is teaching people insults in a foreign language under the guise of friendly greetings. It is something that he picked up from my daughter Omi where she taught him to introduce himself to an associate of mine as... " he thinks for a second "oh yes the tickler of goat testicles."

Khelan looks slightly embarrassed by the story and tries to change the subject.

"So ummm, where is wee Omi anyway? He asks looking around.

"She is currently busy with other matters and will join us in due course."

Shin sits back down on the floor and motions for Khelan and Maul to do the same.

"So tell me why have came here and more importantly when are you planning on opening that?" he asks gesturing to the box Khelan is carrying.

"Ah'll let Maul here explain why we're here and ah wis just gettin tae the box, trust me" he responds.

Khelan opens the box to reveal a bottle of sake and three small drinking cups, he pours one for Shin and Maul and puts the flask down. Shin picks it up and pours Khelans drink.

"At least some of what I taught you stuck" he says raising his cup

"Kanpai!" says Shin holding his cup up

Khelan copies him and gently touches his cup against Shins.

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