Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
15 Apr 2019, 8:13pm
Maul begins laughing.

"Yeah, hearing Leo's singing while locked up in there....I'd probably come out of there a complete nutcase."

He looks over to Khelan.

"Well, time to get this over with."

He says as he stands up and leaves the cockpit to get the engine cleaning solution and coveralls out of his cabin.

Maul then makes his way to the engine room.

He looks around and shakes his head before getting to work.
15 Apr 2019, 10:56pm
Khelan leans back in his chair, pulls up the media player built into the command console and classical music starts blasting out of the speakers installed around the pythons cockpit.

He lights himself a cigar, draws deeply and starts to sing along with the music.

"'It's cold ootside
and the paint's peeling offa ma walls
there's a man ootside
in a long coat, grey hat, smokin a cigarette
now the light fades oot
an Ah' m wunnering whit Ah'm daein in a room like this
there's a knock oan the door
and jus fur a second Ah thought Ah remembered ye"

Leo drops the music's volume and informs him of an incoming message.

Khelan pulls it up onscreen, reads the contents and scowls at the news contained within.

He taps the ships intercom

*Hey Maul, ye might wanna finish up wit yer daein an get oan up here, oor schedule just goat a good bit tighter "
15 Apr 2019, 11:23pm
Maul stops working at the sound of the intercom and wipes sweat from his forehead.

He stops by his cabin to change out of the overalls and into something clean before continuing to the cockpit.

"Hey man, what's going on?"

He sits down in his seat and looks over to Khelan.
16 Apr 2019, 9:07am
Khelan looks over to Maul.

"Oor target's due tae start movin in the next couple of days so we've goat tae get there, pretty sharp."

"It's time tae tell ye exactly wit yer gettin intae, oor target is the INV Duval, she's an impy Majestic Class innerdictor, Noo apparently she's goat some seriously innerestin data held in her computer core, Ah'll be honest wi ye, ah didnae know wit it is because ah didnae ask aboot it, all ah've been telt is we'll know it when we see it, an by we ah mean you."

He takes a mouthful of his tea and continues.

"Now apparently the core is roughly in the middle of the ship an it's shielded so the only way tae get wits oan there is tae innerface wi the computer at source, ye see where Ah'm goin wi this yit?"

"Ah think ah've pretty much figured oot how tae get ye oan board, but ye'll huv tae figure oot how tae get aff again."

"Sound gud tae ye? Ye better go get kitted up we're jumpin intae system in five minutes."
16 Apr 2019, 5:39pm
Maul sits silent for a moment in a bit of a shock with his eyebrows raised.

"This is some serious shit."

He says as he stands up and looks at Khelan.

"This will be the biggest job I've been involved in."

Maul says as he smiles and leaves the cockpit muttering things to himself.

He goes to his cabin and straps his backpack around him.

He reenters the cockpit again and sits at the edge of his seat while typing frantically on his data-slate.

"Okay, so I'm going to wear this so we can talk while I'm on the ship."

Maul holds up a small earpiece showing it to Khelan before putting it in his ear and then continues typing.

"If this all starts going south I can at least let you know and you can get the hell out of there."

He then gets a small data chip out of a pocket on his backpack and inserts it into his data-slate and smiles.

"Yeah there we go." He says while still typing.

"Okay, I think I'm ready."

"So, what's the plan to get me on board? I imagine I'm going to stick out like a sore thumb on board."

Maul says as he puts his data-slate back into his pocket and looks over at Khelan.
16 Apr 2019, 6:23pm
Khelan gives Maul his trademark grin although this time he looks a bit more psychotic than usual.

"Well there's two choices, first wan is Ah hand ye tae them, yer a fugitive remember? Course that means yer withoot yer gear unless ye've goat somewhere tae hide it oan yersel that ah don't want tae know aboot. And there's the chance they might just shoot ye where ye stand tae save them the hassle of dealin wi ye.

"Second choice which means ye get tae keep yer gear, Ah get as close as ah can tae the ship, hope naebody is lookin oot the windae at the time, fling ye oot the airlock and ye find yer own way in."

Khelan gives Maul a serious look

"Your choice mate"
16 Apr 2019, 6:49pm
Maul thinks for a second before pulling out his data-slate.

He types a few things and holds it up to show Khelan.

"I have this blueprint of a Majestic Class Interdictor"

Maul points at the blue print on his data-slate.

"See the rail guns on the bottom of the ship? I'm thinking we get close enough to agitate them and when they deploy hardpoints and hopefully give us a warning, you blast me out the airlock and I'll get in the gun bay. There shouldn't be that many windows around that area, so no one should actually see me."

Maul looks at Khelan and grins.

"And when they retract hardpoints, I'll be on board."
16 Apr 2019, 7:08pm
Khelan looks at Maul

"Yer a crazy bastard Maul Montresor, it's why Ah like ye! Now let's get this show oan the road"

The Prid arrives in system and Khelan checks the navi-comp.

"Found the bastard, the fucker's big enough tae show up as a POI, that'll make findin it a bit easier."

He sets course for the INV Duval at maximum speed.

"Leo lemme know when we're at 2 mega metres frae target!"

"Acknowledged commander"

"That'll be yer get yer arse intae the airlock signal. Wit am gonnae dae is seal aff the door tae the cockpit and wedge the inner airlock door open, that way when ye open the ooter door the air rushin oot should fire ye oot like ye've goat a rocket up yer airse."

"let's dae this"

"Ready mate?" he asks.
16 Apr 2019, 7:37pm
Maul stands up, closes his eyes and takes a deep breath.

"Yeah, let's do this."

Maul grabs his helmet and walks back towards the airlock and waits for the signal.
16 Apr 2019, 9:02pm
Khelan locks the cockpit doors and makes sure that his remlock is nearby just incase the seal doesn't work correctly.

"2 mega meters until target"

"Nae turnin back now"

He watches the distance counter roll down, waiting for the very last moment to drop out of supercruise. The Prid shakes violently at the sudden deceleration and the massive form of a majestic class interdictor fills the view.

"Attention unknown vessel you have entered restricted space, identify yourself immediately!"

Khelan gulps and starts throwing the Prid around randomly weaving up and down, left and right.

He turns the comms on and starts singing really loudly back to the imperial vessel

"Show me the way tae go home
Ah'm tired an Ah wanna go tae bed
Ah hid a little drink
aboot an hour ago
and it's gone straight
tae my heid"

He jukes the Prid around under the nose of the cruiser doing a splendid impression of a drunken pilot.

"Attention unknown vessel, vacate the space around this vessel immediately!"

The blue lights around the imperial capital ship turn from blue to red as it deploys its weapons hard points

"Attention unknown vessel this is your last warning, vacate the area immediately or you will be destroyed!"

Khelan flicks the comm to Maul.

Showtime mate, get yer airse oot there afore we're turnt tae dust! "
16 Apr 2019, 9:15pm
Maul puts on his helmet and and punches the button to open the outer airlock door.

He is propelled out of the ship much faster than expected and flies directly towards a deployed rail gun.

Maul smacks the side of the rail gun and tries to grab anything he can hold onto.

Once secured in the gun bay he attempts to communicate with Khelan through his earpiece.

"Jesus, that's the first and last time I want to be face to face with a rail gun."

"You better get out of here before they blast you to bits."
16 Apr 2019, 9:36pm
Khelan flicks to Maul's channel.

"Ye don't have tae tell me twice, Ah'll drop back tae a safe place and wait fur yer signal"

He yanks the control stick hard and aims the Prid away from massive vessel.

"Good luck mate. Dinnae you go getting dead oan me y'hear?"
16 Apr 2019, 11:38pm
Maul holds on to the railgun as it retracts back into the ship.

Once inside he takes his helmet off and opens the maintenance door to exit the gun bay.

"Alright let's see where we're at" Maul says as he looks over the blueprint of the ship.

"Okay, so the computer should be quite a few floors above me."

Maul finds the nearest elevator on the blueprint and starts running towards it.

He rounds the corner to see two men guarding the elevator and quickly backs back around the corner.

Maul listens for a moment as the two men discuss how they hated being on guard duty and couldn't wait to be promoted to a more exciting job.

Maul decided to try a power move and approaches them with a stern face.

"Excuse me recruits, in what world does it take two men to watch one goddamn elevator?"

The recruits look at each other and then back to Maul.

"Wipe those goofy looks off your faces or I'll drag you both down to the airlock and toss your sorry asses out and tell your mamas that you both went MIA."

Both recruits straighten up.

"Sorry Sir!"

Maul points at one of them.

"You, yeah you're coming with me. Open this damn elevator."

The recruit uses his key card to open the elevator and he and Maul step on.

Maul barks an order at the recruit.

"We're going up to the 13th floor."

The recruit looks back at Maul.

"Sir, I don't have clearance for that level."

Maul looks surprised for a moment then attempts to get back into character.

"Well, uh, get off this damn elevator then! What good are you?!"

The recruit steps off leaving Maul in the elevator alone.

Maul reaches over and presses the button to close the doors.

"Fuck, I need to be quick before they realize this elevator isn't moving."

He swings his backpack around and pulls out the same gadget he used on The Prid's access elevator.

After a moment he gets the elevator moving.

"Maybe I should have been an actor." He says while laughing to himself.

The elevator stops on the 13th floor.

"Okay the computer should be on this floor somewhere."

Maul begins walking around looking for anything that would indicate where the computer is.

Maul relays some information to Khelan.

"I figured security would be heavier on this floor."

Maul then sees a big steel door with a palm scanner.

"Ah, I bet this is it!"

Maul unscrews the palm scanner exposing the wires behind it and hard wires a small circuit board to it and screws it back into place.

He connects his data-slate to the circuit board wirelessly and keys in a few commands before putting his hand on the palm scanner to open the door.

"Whew, I half expected that to set off an alarm."

Maul walks in to the room and the door closes behind him.

His eyes begin to light up when he sees the computer core.

"Ah, we finally meet. Let's get to work."

Maul plugs his data-slate into the computer and runs a program to gain access and begins looking for anything interesting.

He spots something called "TSClearence".

"Huh, what's this?"

He opens it and finds loads of personal information on politicians and wealthy individuals from around the galaxy, prototype military ship designs, prototype weapon blueprints and a slew of other information.

"This has to be what they were wanting."

He pulls out a storage device and plugs it into the computer and starts downloading all the data.

While it's downloading he continues browsing the computer. He finds that he has access to some of the ships systems and security cameras as well as access to information of everyone on the ship.

He scrolls through the multiple camera feeds and stops on one of himself.

"Wait a second..."

Maul turns and looks directly at a camera pointing at him from the corner of the ceiling.

"Fuck."

Security starts beating on the door and yelling.

"We know you're in there!"

"Why the hell isn't this palm scanner working!?"

"Override the controls we need access!"

Maul checks to make sure the download was complete then deletes the data off the computer core and plugs a small component into the computer that gives him remote access.

The big steel door slides open and security have their guns trained on Maul.

"Turn around to face us and put your hands up."

Maul keeps his back turned and starts typing commands into his data slate and suddenly every light on the ship goes out.

The lights come back on and begin pulsating to the rhythm of a song playing over the intercom and loud speakers of the ship.

"Where the fuck did he go?"

Maul had vanished.

A security guard points up to a flapping vent cover.

"He's in the fucking vents!"

Maul bursts out of and overhead vent into a hallway and starts running.

He stops to type in a command on his data-slate and suddenly everyone's data-slates on the ship starts flashing a picture of a Winking Cat. Maul was always a big fan of the Winking Cat Thief.

He starts laughing and continues running.

"Khelan! I'm running for an escape pod. Scoop me up around the back side of this big motherfucker in about 5 minutes."

After dodging security personnel and running continuously Maul finally approaches the escape pods with a rain of bullets around him.

He pulls out his data-slate to remotely hack the door open on an escape pod and jumps in then closes it shut.

One of the multiple guards that was chasing him puts his face up to the window on the door of the pod and grinds his teeth at Maul.

Maul grins and flips him off as he presses the button to release the escape pod.


Last edit: 17 Apr 2019, 2:50am
17 Apr 2019, 11:32pm
Khelan sits in the darkened cockpit of the Prid waiting for Maul's signal.

"Ah swear tae God if ye die over there Ah'm gonnae kick the shite outta ye"

He looks at the ships chronometer yet again.

"Leo how longs he been over there now?"

"20 minutes commander"

The earpiece crackles into life with Maul's message.

"Oan ma way mate"

"Leo gie me as much powur as ye can tae the engines an shields. Keep a wee bit fur the scanner an the scoop, everythin else tae engines."

"Warning engines will be operating above safety limits authorisation required for....."

"Leo, just fuckin dae it"

Khelan slams the throttle as far forward as possible while hitting the afterburner and the Prid leaps forward the engines screaming in protest. He jukes the ancient python around the rear of imperial cruiser.

"Leo engage Silent Runnin an pop a heat sink, ah don't wanna cook maself in here"

Watching the scanner with one eye he aims for a red blinking dot that's appeared. The flashing red indicating Maul's escape pod. He hits the control for the control for the scoop and the display to his left changes to show the pod in a set of crosshairs. Without slowing down he keeps the Prid aimed directly at the pod, keeping it centred.

The voice of Leo fills the cockpit

"200 meters until target, warning damage to pod probable due to high velocity! "

Khelan slams the reverse thrusters to full power and the Prid groans and creaks in protest.

"Hull integrity compromised."

"50 meters until target"

Khelan makes a few minor adjustments to keep the pod centred, sweat trickling down his brow from the rapidly heating ship.

"Scooping successful"

He quickly hits the scoop control and swings the Prid around away from the imperial vessel. Pushing the throttle hard against the stop and hitting the afterburner to get a few more metres per second out of the already tortured engines.

"Warning, taking systems damage!"

Khelan presses the control to fire a heat sink..... Nothing happens.

"Aw shite, shite, shiiiiiiiite!"

He presses again and again, still nothing. The launcher has malfunctioned.

Alarms blaring in the cockpit, the acrid stench of melting insulation and overheating components filling his nose.

He hits the control to disable silent running and the ships cooling vents open almost immediately.

The blue running lights on the imperial capital ship turn red as its hard points deploy and the massive guns turn to track the python.

Khelan hits the frame shift command and nothing happens they're caught up in the interdiction field. He hits the burners again and the ship leaps forward

"C'moan ya basturd shift yer airse"

A deafening roar echos around the ship and the Prid starts bucking and vibrating.

"Shields offline, hull integrity compromised" comes the ever calm voice of Leo.

"Warning, hull breach detected. Loss of Atmosphere immenent!"

"Leo seal all doors and hatches"

He notices the mass lock light blink out and he hits the fsd hoping they've got enough time before they get hit again

The countdown begins as another shot tears into the hull.

"C'moan baby, hauld together"

The ship jumps to the relative safety of witchspace and away from the capital ship.
18 Apr 2019, 2:45am
Maul can hear alarms and and shots going off while still stuck inside the escape pod. He puts on a helmet that is strapped inside the pod before attempting to open the door just to be safe.

He punches the button to open the door on the escape pod a few times before it finally opens.

Once out of the pod he checks that the storage device holding the data he had just stolen was still intact.

"Yes!" He says as he attempts to kiss the device before remembering he has a helmet on.

He smiles at his own stupidity and runs to the cockpit. The doors were sealed shut.

"Oh shit."

Maul then tries to talk to Khelan with his earpiece.

"Khelan, I heard the alarms going off but couldn't get the damn pod door open. How are we doing up there?"

"And please don't tell me we are screwed because I just pulled off some action hero shit and I have to tell somebody the story."

Maul jokes to hide the fact that he is actually worried.

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