Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

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Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

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25 Apr 2019, 9:53pm
Maul drops his head to think for a moment.

"Maybe I'm just using this "being toxic" thing as a way to keep myself from getting close to others." He says to himself.

He leaves the cockpit mumbling to himself as he walks down the hallway.

"What did he mean he'd teach me how to act around women? I just meant that I have never experienced attraction towards anyone."

Maul shakes his head and continues walking.

"Fuck it, I'll explain it to him later."
25 Apr 2019, 11:47pm
Khelan hears Maul going past his hiding place and leaps out on him yelling "Boo!!!" at the same time before erupting into howls of laughter.
26 Apr 2019, 3:31am
Maul jumps and slams against the wall.

"Jesus Christ!.....Ah you fucking bastard! Ya wanting me to shit my flight suit?" Maul says before laughing along with Khelan.

He takes a moment to calm down.

"Fuck man, if you do hire some crew members they're in for a hell of a time" Maul says jokingly.

"Maybe hang a sign to warn them, "BEWARE OF BIG SCOTTISH COWBOYS IN BATHROBES"" Maul says gesturing each word with his hand.
26 Apr 2019, 7:38am
Khelan takes a moment to try and compose himself

"Well, ye know it's kinda yer ain fault if ye hadnae said aboot the place bein eerie ah widnae have hid the idea tae scare the shite oota ye."

"Ah wis thinkin aboot putting up a sign sayin "Beware of the Leopard" an if folk goat the reference then Ah'd know they're OK tae hiv onboard."

Khelan pats Maul on the back

" Ah'm gonnae get dressed and get some breakfast, we're gear up the moment they finish loadin us an Ah'm desperate tae get this big fucker oot intae the black tae see wit she can dae"
26 Apr 2019, 5:51pm
Maul nods.

"Yeah I'm curious how this thing handles as well. I've always been worried I'd get stuck in the slot trying to leave the station. Guess that's what these new advanced auto dock computers are for."

Maul thinks for a moment.

"You know, I can't even remember where I was going." He says as he laughs and walks back towards the cockpit.

"Ah whatever, I'm going to head back in here and hang around looking at all the new stuff until your finished."
26 Apr 2019, 10:52pm
Khelan is lying on his bunk watching one of his beloved ancient science fiction shows and munching on a bowl of cereal until the voice of Leo interrupts him.

"Cargo loaded and secured commander."

Khelan keeps eating and watching the show while trying to figure out just how exactly a ship can be huge on the inside and tiny on the outside...

"Commander? Cargo is loaded and secured, shall I begin the launch preparations?"

Khelan keeps watching and eating, totally lost in his show.

"Commander? Are you even listening? Cargo is on board, secured and we are ready to leave the station" Leo's voice is louder now and sounds slightly like an exasperated parent.

Khelan sighs and gets off his bed.

"Aye OK OK ah hear ye Leo, Start the preparations fur leavin."

He turns off the viewer and shudders

"They fuckin weepin' statues gie me the fear man" he says to himself before heading out of the commanders cabin and up to the bridge, stopping once to check he's going in the right direction.

He walks onto the bridge and sits down in his chair causing the consoles surrounding his station to come to life.

"Man, Ah fuckin love that" he says will a smile


Last edit: 26 Apr 2019, 11:00pm
26 Apr 2019, 11:31pm
Maul hears Khelan enter the cockpit and puts his data-slate in his pocket.

"Yo, it sounds like Leo was giving you a good talking to back there." He says smiling at Khelan.

"So, we ready to head out and see what this puppy can do?" Maul says as he sits up in his seat.
27 Apr 2019, 8:45am
"Aye, apparently if I dinnae answer him right away he gets his knickers in a right twist."

"Ready tae get this show oan the road?" he asks starting the Pre-Flight checklist.

He performs various tasks as the display in front of him asks him to, a small green light next to each item lights to signify the check has come back without a fault.

"Looks good so far" he says while pressing the return to surface button.

The hanger mechanism shudders and groans slightly as it starts to move the giant vessel to the surface. The Anaconda emerges into the main bay and Khelan notices a few of bay workers stop what they're doing and look at the garish red and yellow painted ship as it gets moved into launch position.

"Anaconda Whisky Tango Foxtrot to Flight Control, requesting launch permission."

"Flight Control to Anaconda Whisky Tango Foxtrot, Launch permission granted you are clear to depart."

Khelan flicks on the auto launch and takes his hands away from the controls. The huge ship lifts smoothly and off the pad and slowly exists the station. The Anaconda slips through the mailslot and out into the blackness of space.

"Well that wis anti-climatic, ah wis expectin a wee bitty music like when we're dockin."

He takes a few moments to put the massive vessel through a few rolls and loops of increasing violence to get used to the controls and throttle response. The direction changes barely noticeable in the plush cockpit.

He looks over to Maul, clearly impressed with the ship.

"Right let's go find yer wee Krait."

He stands up and motions to the pilots chair.

"Do ye want tae do the honours?"
28 Apr 2019, 12:53am
"Uh sure, I haven't flown in a while so I might be a bit rusty."  Maul says as he stand's up and walks over to the pilots chair and sits down.

He looks over at Khelan before doing anything.

"I've also never flown a ship this big either. So, I'll try not to do anything too stupid." He says before grasping the controls to do a few slow barrel rolls following with a few engine boosts and slow flips.

Maul smiles as he targets the next system on their route and points the ship in the general direction. He boosts to get away from the station and starts charging the FSD.

He cancels stands up as the FSD charges to let Khelan take the controls again and starts walking back to the co-pilot seat.

"She's  a bit big and slow for my tastes but I can see the appeal for these ships." Maul says to Khelan.

"For someone like yourself who is out here trading for a living. Well, she makes a perfect home away from home."

Maul sits down and looks over at Khelan.

"Speaking of which, if you don't mind indulging me for a moment, what got you into the business of trading in the first place? Back when I was a bartender I used to ask every pilot that came through what their stories were. It always intrigued me. Besides, you know quite a bit of my history from my criminal record but I never asked anything about you."

Maul smirks a bit.

"Hell, honestly though, I didn't want to get to know you at first. I figured we'd do this job together, get paid and part ways. You're kind of the first person I've ever considered a friend out here. When I left Dalton Gateway last year, I left all of my childhood friends out there as well."

"It's cool if you're not comfortable talking about it though. No biggie."
28 Apr 2019, 3:02am
Killian sits back in his Chair, and sighs as the smell of Mandarin orange spice tea fills the room with its aroma. He flips through the news and going ons in the galaxy and sighs to himself. "one day I hope we do find a way to live in peace, stop all this fighting and bic-" Killian was cut short by a loud rumble and alarms through out his python... "Orion's belt!, what now?"

He looks out through the canopy and sees a huge imperial cutter hovering over him. His stomach sinks, "OK Killian, think..don't panic" **incoming hale** "this is Lieutenant Commander, Killian Deyoe, of the Federation, I am unarmed and don't want any trouble"

**static and interference** "Ah, Greetings Commander, this is Prince, Hammond the third, and I mean you no harm, we have already scanned your... Ship... And you are clean which means I have no business with you, besides some information, have you seen any other ships out here besides you, we have word that a known pirate was lurking around here some time ago, have you run across him by chance? "

Killian chuckles," ha!, if that was the case I'd be long dead floating in space, whats his name? If I see him I could contact you, and maybe get in on some of that bounty? " the prince was quiet for a few minutes then broke back in " very well Lieutenant Commander, if you see him you hale me first.... Then you might get a reward... He goes by the name of Jaden Palm"

"ten-four, if I see him you'll be the first to know... And please next time you decide to seek up on someone be a little more subtle, huh?, Killian out."
28 Apr 2019, 11:16pm
Khelan sits back in the pilots chair and looks over to Maul.

"Ah suppose we've goat a bit of time so Ah'll tell ye aboot me. After all ye did fire yersel oot an airlock at a fuckin big imperial vessel fur me so ah suppose Ah owe ye that much"

Khelan smiles at Maul

"Noo this is a story all aboot how
Ma life goat flipped turned upside doon
And Ah'd like tae take a minute, just sit right there
Ah'll tell ye how Ah became the prince of a town called Bel-Air"

Khelan laughs at Maul's obvious confusion

"Relax mate, Ah'm jus messin wae ye a wee bit."

"Ah wis born in a wee toon just ootside of Glasga, that's in Scotland oan Earth in the Sol system, cradle of humanity an all that shite incase ye didnae know. Ye ever been tae Sol? It's a shitehole jus like any other capital system, them that have, have an them that dinnae, well they dinnae. We wur maist firmly in the dinnae's "

"There wis me, ma maw, ma useless alky da an that wis it."

"Ah grew up sittin oan the knee of Creepy Auld Uncle Albert who used tae tell me stories aboot his time galavanting aroon up in the black. He started oaf wi a wee Eagle and a hunner creds left tae him in the will of his Uncle Albert who get this, apparently used tae fly aroon at the same time as that guy Jameson durin the first Thargoid war. Anyway Ah digress ma uncle Albert he built himsel up frae almost nothing tae deadly an spent maist of his time huntin bounties an shite like that. "

"That's why Ah became a pilot, that an tae get me offa Earth "

"Ah joined the Federal Navy when ah could an started pilot training. That's when they found oot aboot ma condition. Dinnae worry Ah'm no contagious oar anythin Ah've goat a condition called ADD, stands fur Attention Deficit Disorder incase ye were wunnerin. In a nutshell ah struggle tae concentrate oan things that ah dinnae find directly innerestin and ye might have noticed this yin, Ah tend tae say wit Ah'm thinkin withoot thinkin wit the ramifications might be. There's some stuff like bein behind the controls of a ship and music fur example just chill me right oot. "

"Noo it's treatable wi drugs etc but the feds dinnae want their flybhoys oan drugs so they offered me a choice, either become a deck monkey oar get tae fuck."

"Ah bummed around fur a couple of years, daein odd joabs some legal some no so legal y'know? Till wan day ah found masell in some seedy dive in London playing Blackjack wi a couple of guys who wurnae exactly salubrious. Ah won ma first ship a wee sidewinder offa wan of the guys an when ah went tae get it ah goat jumped offa a couple of his mates who didnae want me tae have ma ship. Ah goat away wi the ship but ah also goat this "

He taps the side of his head just at the cybernetic replacement right eye.

" Ah made it tae Abraham Lincoln Station where they patched me up and sent me oan ma merry way."

" Ah made scratch daein cargo runs and courier joabs till ah could afford a cobra 3,nice wee ship that ah might add."
"After the cobra Ah bought a type 6 an that wis a pile of shite, slow, unresponsive, smelt permanently of shite and fried ye if ye even thought aboot usin the fsd. Ah wis pokin aboot it wan day when ah found a wee secret storage compartment that the previous owner musta had put in. In it Ah found a load of wimmen's frilly knickers, basques, stockins and the like tho Ah'll tell ye she musta been a big girl maist of that stuff wid have been too big for you and me tae wear at the same time!!"

" Ah also found a wee data store loaded wi auld telly shows frae the 20 and 21st century comedy's and wit they called Science Fiction and loads of music etc. Maist of it's shite but there's a few shows and artists that Ah'm diggin "

He stretches and looks around the cockpit.

" Ah'm no borin ye am Ah?"
29 Apr 2019, 1:07am
Maul smiles at Khelan and shakes his head.

"No, not at all actually. I genuinely enjoy hearing people tell their stories. People can get so caught up in their own heads sometimes and it's refreshing watching and hearing someone look back at their life and lay it all out in front of themselves. I was always happiest hearing people talk about their own lives. I enjoy seeing the world from their perspectives temporarily."

Maul laughs.

"My mom always used to tell me I could handle other peoples problems better than my own. I've kind of always struggled with self confidence and social anxiety. I mean, I've been out here for over a year and you're the first friend I've made. That's kinda strange in most peoples books.

"But all of that is probably why I enjoy learning about other people so much. It makes me feel better hearing that we all have problems and suffer in different ways. I guess it makes people seem relatable."

Maul looks down and laughs.

"I guess everyone is just as fucked up as everyone else out here."

He looks back up and nods at Khelan.

"It's comforting."
29 Apr 2019, 9:55pm
Khelan nods in agreement

"Anywan tells ye that they ain't even a wee bitty fucked in the hied is talkin pish. We've all goat demons whisperin shite intae oor ears. The trick is no tae let them control or define ye. Easier said than done Ah know but it's either that or end up in a wee padded room screamin aboot yer ship bein haunted by the ghost of a chicken."

Khelan thinks for a few moments before continuing.

" Noo where wis ah? So yeah ah wis grinding away in that stinkin type 6 shiftin polymers frae wan system tae another then goin back wi medicines till ah cud afford that auld python ah wis in wen ye met me. Thing is ah wis pretty much skint aifter buyin it so ah ended up haulin the same shite back an forward till ah cud afford tae dae wit ah wanted tae her.

"Wan day ah found masel in a wee place in Hondo City playin cairds wi a buncha tech nerds an they wur uptae their eyes in debt so we struck a wee deal tae dae a wee bitty work oan the Prid's systems, some experimental semi-artificial intelligence shite probably knocked aff frae somewhere else. They also goat me a new eye an tied it intae the S.A.I. tae replace the cheap shity wan frae Lincoln Station. That wis how ah knew ye wur messin aboot wi the ships systems."

"So there ye go, that's pretty much ma story, Ah'm jus a bloke tryin tae make ends meet same as everywan else.
29 Apr 2019, 11:49pm
Maul sighs and nods his head.

"Damn man....what a life you've lived. Thanks for letting me get to know the real you. Shit like that builds trust."

Maul looks at Khelan.

"Now that I know the real you, I think I should explain why it is I'm actually wanted. I mean, I'm wanted for murder, kidnapping, hacking....and....well a lot of dumb shit. The criminal records don't really explain why though. They are just bare accusations with no story."

"Roughly a year ago I was working for a corporation in Eravate. I hauled cargo for them. That lasted a few months until they "promoted" me to the Escort and Protect Division. They trained me in combat, both in ship and on foot. I had never touched a gun before that but, really the job actually was much simpler than the training was. I pretty much just followed cargo ships back and forth and made sure no pirates fucked with us. It was an okay job. My first real one after I quit the bartender gig and left my home station."

"It was going great for a while but some high ranking member of the corporation tasked me to make a preemptive strike on a pirate who had been harassing our cargo ships. I figured this was my big break. I could show the head honchos that I was capable of following orders and they'd be impressed with me. That however was not the case. They gave me the pirates location and I went off to finish this asshole off. Turns out when I arrived, there was no pirate. There was however the CEO of a corporation that we were rivaling against. Now, at the time I didn't know this. I just targeted the ship and opened fire. Never even thought to check who my target was. I didn't figure The Corporation would lie to me?"

"Long story short, I killed that guy. I guess it was mostly my fault for not letting the scan finish. That doesn't matter though. Turns out that guy is an asshole. He was indeed the CEO of a rival corporation but the corporation he worked for were smuggling narcotics. Even funnier. So was the corporation I worked for. I had no idea. Nobody does, except the higher ranking members. They hide the narcotics among normal cargo and ship it all around the galaxy. A lot of people still work there too. They are all clueless though. They are just working to make ends meet. Just like you said."

Maul starts to become visibly upset.

"I had to run away from all of that and try to start a new life. All because of damned narcotics. It didn't end there though. The Corporation wanted me arrested or dead. I'm still not sure. I was a loose end though and they needed to get rid of me somehow. After close to a year of hiding, they discovered where I was and had me twisted back up in their schemes. They hired a local cartel at Ray Gateway to help them frame me for the murder of one of their own. Isaac Kiani...he was the man who tasked me with killing that "pirate" that set all of this in motion. It worked too. I was at his apartment when station security arrived and found him dead. He was shot in the head before I even got there. Security saw me leaving his apartment and I barely escaped."

Maul let's out a long breath and calms down.

"It goes on but I'll spare you and stop there."

"The Corporation have ties everywhere though or at least as far as I can tell they do. I thought they had something to do with me losing a month and appearing on Citi Gateway but now I'm not so sure because this is the most peace I've seen in a long time. I don't think they know where I am."

Maul looks over at Khelan.

"Sorry for the long winded rant. I just figured you should know exactly who you are hauling around with you."

"I'm tired of running though. I reckon when I get home I'm going to finally try to put an end to all of this. One way or another."
30 Apr 2019, 8:55am
Khelan thinks for a brief moment

"Oar they know exactly where ye are an are just keepin tabs oan ye until ye go tae someplace they don't want ye to be an we get jumped by hired goons. Ah mean ye loast a month of yer life, woke up oan citi gateway wi nae idea hoo ye goat there. Who's tae say that they hivnae been messing aroon inside ye leavin trackers oar somethin?"

Khelan suddenly looks ashen faced.

"See when ye woke up? Ye didnae think tae get checked over did ye? Oar did ye go straight intae that bar wi'oot thinkin?"

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