Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
23 Apr 2019, 10:21pm
Khelan tucks into the food in front of him and looks up to Maul.

"It wiz fuckin weird mate, Ah went tae deliver an wen Ah goat there there wiz jus a door wi a wee buzzer, Ah pressed it an this wee panel thing opened, Ah dropped the storage doohicky intae it, it closed an we goat PAID. It wiz like pure cloak n dagger shite. Tae be honest wi ye Ah'm jus glad that shite's behind us.

Khelan takes another few mouthfuls of food before continuing.

"Ah almost forgoat" he says taking out his pad and tapping a few icons on the screen transferring 125000000 to Maul's account.

"There ye go mate."
23 Apr 2019, 11:00pm
Maul opens his data-slate to check the transfer and gets choked on his food.

"Holy!...cough...cough"

Maul clears his throat and stares at the transfer.

"What in the absolute fuck, man? This is way more than I was anticipating."

Maul puts his data-slate back in his pocket.

"I know I should probably be happy right now and well, I am, but I still can't help but wonder what these people wanted with that kind of information."

Maul shrugs and takes another bite of his food.

"Ah, best not to let it bother me. I reckon we should celebrate and enjoy ourselves."

Maul looks at Khelan.

"So, have you got anything planned to do with your cut?"


Last edit: 23 Apr 2019, 11:05pm
23 Apr 2019, 11:42pm
Khelan laughs as Maul starts choking.

"Noo ye see why Ah took the joab, Ah've nevvur saw so many zero's at the end of a number afore."

Khelan takes another bite of the stuff in sauce savouring every mouthful.

"As fur wit Ah'm gonnae dae well if ye still want that lift tae where ye left yer Krait meet me doon in hanger 09 in the mornin an ye'll fin oot."

Khelan thinks while chewing a bit of turnip.

"As fur the folk wit wanted it ah say we furget we evur hid anythin tae dae wi them an tell folk we goat left a wee bit frae oor auld uncle in his will or some such shite."

Khelan finishes his food and dabs his lips with a neon pink napkin. Before sighing in contention.

"Ah dunno if ye've noticed or no but there's a right wee darlin sittin by hersel at the bar an she keeps oan eyein ye up. Poor wee thing must be blind oar somethin but Ah think ye might wanna go ovur there an offur her a wee drinkie-poo or seven."

"There's nae point in ma stayin here bein a third wheel. Go git hur tiger!"

With that he gets up from the table and heads off down to the hanger bays and into bay 09 where a brand new Anaconda is sitting getting repainted in the same garish red and yellow paint scheme as his old python, the name "Prid of Ankh-Morpork" emblazoned proudly on each side of her prow.

He goes aboard and the voice of Leo booms over the internal speakers

"Greetings Commander, all data from the core of your previous ship has finished being transferred. All your files are now available and ready for your viewing or listing pleasure."

Khelan smiles and heads off to his new cabin.

"Leo cue up "Red Dwarf" fur me wid ye?"

"At once commander."

"Hey Leo?"

"Yes commander?"

"Has anywan ever telt ye ye sound a lot like "Holly" the ships computer oan "Red Dwarf?"

"Yes commander, you have. Several times"

"Magic! Noo Ah'm gonnae go lie in ma bunk an watch telly, wake us up if an when Maul gets here. But if he's too early make him wait a wee bit wid ye?

"Acknowledged commander"
24 Apr 2019, 1:41am
Maul nods and smiles as Khelan leaves the bar.

He looks over at the bar and notices a girl staring at him.

Maul smiles and waves at her before getting up and leaving.

"I'd just end up disappointing her or hurting her. Better off alone." Maul says to himself.

He stops outside the bar and looks around the market.

He puts some old school wireless earbuds in and plays some music on an old device he retrofitted himself and makes his way to a tech store to load up on some gear he lost during the job.

Afterwards, he continues on to a sketchy motel he planned to spend the night at.

"I just need some time alone. Gotta recalibrate." He says to himself.

Maul walks into the motel and rents a room for the night.

He enters his room, puts his gear down and throws himself onto the bed.

While laying in bed he receives a message from an anonymous contact on his data-slate.  

"Hope you're okay. We need to talk."

Maul looks at the data-slate confused.

He shakes it off and tries to get some sleep before going to meet Khelan in the morning.
24 Apr 2019, 11:05am
After a long day of mining, Killian checks his charts of the planet down below him, "seems safe enough" he thinks to himself "if I just run the minimals, I shouldn't be detected if a pirate comes snooping around" sighing to himself he makes his way down to the lonely planet to find a good spot to hide /sleep.
As he settles in he double checks his radars and sensors, " Gabrielle?"
**yes, Commander? **
" Be a doll and keep an eye on us tonight, Alert me if you sense anything, will you?
**yes Commander, as you wish**
" thank you, Goodnight then"
**goodnight Commander**
24 Apr 2019, 5:57pm
Maul awakes in a sweat. The air conditioner in his room had stopped working in the middle of the night.

"Perfect." He says sarcastically as he checks the time before getting ready and meeting Khelan.

He slowly crawls out of bed and gets dressed.

The sounds of fighting and arguing can be heard down the hall in another room.

"Should have picked a fancier motel to sleep at. I got all these credits now...ah...whatever" He says as he slides his boots on.

He grabs his backpack by the door on the way out and heads out to Hanger 09 to meet Khelan.

Maul enters the hangar and sees an Anaconda. He figures he is in the wrong place and starts to turn around when he notices "Prid of Ankh-Morpork" on the side of the ship.

"Holy shit! So, that's what he did with his cut." Maul says with a smirk.

He approaches the access elevator of the Anaconda and sends Khelan a message letting him know he has arrived.

He eyeballs the elevator controls.

"Nah, not again. He'd kill me this time."

Maul chuckles and leans up against the side of the elevator and waits patiently.
24 Apr 2019, 7:04pm
The alarm goes off to alert Khelan that there's someone wanting access to the Prid waking him up with a start.

"Gaahhh, wassat??"

"Good morning commander, Maul is outside, shall I let him in?" asks Leo

"Urgh, ah mean aye, letim in wid ye?"

Khelan erupts into his traditional early morning coughing fit and he thumps his chest to clear it.

"Leo show him up tae the cockpit wid ye, Ah'll be in the heid takin care o business. "

"Yes commander" replies Leo

"And Leo? Stick the tea oan wid ye? Ah'm gaspin fur a cuppa"
24 Apr 2019, 8:03pm
The access elevator opens and Maul steps inside.

Once up top he exits the elevator and Leo politely directs him to the cockpit.

Maul walks for what seems like an eternity before arriving at the cockpit.

"Jesus, these things are fucking huge. Guess I'll mark this off of the list of ships I want, too lazy for this shit." Maul says as he wipes a trickle of sweat off his face.

Leo informs Maul that Khelan will be with him shortly.

"Thanks Leo." Maul says as he begins to walk around the spacious cockpit checking things out while waiting for Khelan.
24 Apr 2019, 9:22pm
Khelan walks out of the head wearing a red bathrobe and a light tan cowboy hat and saunters up to the cockpit pausing to pick up his tea from the dispenser.

"Mornin matey, hope ye had fun last night. Anyway welcome aboard the new Prid, the auld yin wis written aff by the insurance company an creepy auld uncle Albert left me a few credits in his will."

He takes a sip of his tea before continuing.

"She's set up tae haul cargo but she also has some big fuckin guns jus incase some wee scrote decides tae try an separate us frae said cargo. Ye'll hiv control of them and power distribution."

He takes another mouthful of tea

"Noo where did ye say ye left yer Krait?"
24 Apr 2019, 9:47pm
Maul stares at Khelan's cowboy hat as he attempts to listen to what he is saying.

"Digging the hat. It really brings the outfit together." Maul says with a smirk while pointing at Khelan's bathrobe.

Maul straps his backpack into an empty storage compartment and takes a seat.

"Well, the last time I saw my Krait it was back home in Diaguandri on Ray Gateway. I had just made it home and had this eye replaced." He says pointing at his right eye.

"It's a long story but if my Krait is still there I'll let you read my logs. If I were to tell you what's been going on you wouldn't believe me."

Maul shakes his head.

"Anyway, after I adjusted to the new eye and took a few days to relax, I went to the bar. That's the last thing I remember before I woke up on Citi Gateway roughly a month later without a single credit to my name."

Maul shrugs.

"I assume it's still there."
24 Apr 2019, 11:21pm
Khelan looks mildly offended.

"Ah'll huv ye know this look is a Hawkeye Pierce original so dinnae ye go mockin it ya cheeky basturd. An anyway Ah happen tae like it."

He pulls up the galaxy map and types Diaguandri into the search bar.

"Twohunner light years, no too far shud only take us aboot 10 jumps, mair if we wanna haul some cargo wi us an accordin tae trade pad the only thing worthy haulin is is gold and that's gonna draw oot a fair few toerags that will try tae convince us tae hand it over."

"Oar we cud run empty an save a bit of time and a load of hassle. Widdae ye think?"
25 Apr 2019, 12:00am
Maul thinks for a moment before answering.

"I say we do one more haul. Might as well make some credits on our way there." Maul says with a nod.

He looks over to Khelan.

"Oh and sorry if I offended you there. It's not everyday that you see a Scottish cowboy in a bathrobe. I'm sure I'll adjust to it."

Maul stops to laugh a bit.

"And besides, it suits you man!"
25 Apr 2019, 10:41am
Khelan laughs heartily.

"Relax mate, Ah'm jus messin wae ye. But ye've goat tae admit ah dae suit it and it'll dae until ma flight suit's oot the auto-laundromat it wis startin tae smell like a few folk hid died in it."

"So wit dae ye think aboot the new Prid? She's somethin ain't she? Ah think we're gonna get lost a few times trying tae find oor way aboot the place. Ah cannae believe that it oanly takes wan person tae fly her. Ah mean back in creepy auld uncle Albert's day a big beastie like this wid take at least 8 folk just tae get her intae the air. Noo wi all the fancy automation doohickies all ah need is Leo. Ah mean Ah dinnae even huv tae fly her oot the station, she even does that fur me!!!"

Khelan takes a seat in the pilots chair and all the cockpit displays activate in response to the weight on the chair. He laughs in surprise, stands up and all the displays go dark again.

"Man F.D.L. Really put some seriously nice touches intae their ships."

He sits back down and pulls up the commodities market. He punches a few commands in and the bing to signify a credit transfer gently sounds as he buys enough gold to fill up the cavernous 420 tonne hold space.

" It'll take the dock workers a couple of hours tae finish loading her up so ye shud prolly go git yersel settled doon in wan of the cabins, get yersel something tae eat and get cleant up. Then ye can tell me all aboot that wee burd frae" Milliways" last night "
25 Apr 2019, 7:15pm
Maul nods in agreement.

"She really is something. I'll never get used to how big these ships are. I broke a damn sweat walking to the cockpit."

Maul laughs as he grabs his backpack and stands up to leave the cockpit.

"Well, I'm going to go pick a cabin and grab something to eat out of the galley."

Maul walks around the Anaconda following signs leading him to the galley.

He checks a cabinet and finds loads of Sugar Coated Buzz Bombs.

"Yeah that seems about right."

Maul shrugs and grabs an open box to pour some into his hand.

He tosses pieces of the cereal into his mouth as he follows the signs leading him to the cabins.

He chooses the first empty cabin he comes upon and straps his backpack into a secure place before sitting on the bed and pulling out his data-slate.

He stares at the anonymous message he received the night before and shrugs it off again and makes his way back to the cockpit.

He takes an empty seat and turns to Khelan.

"You know, it's really eerie walking around this giant ship alone. I felt like something was going to be waiting to kill me around every corner." Maul says jokingly.

"Anyway, yeah, that girl at the bar. Nothing happened. I just waved at her and left to stock up on some gear. She seemed nice and all but, I don't know man. I'm kind of blank in that area of my brain or something. I have never really felt compelled to be with someone. I guess I'm honestly worried I'll spread my toxicity to others or something. Even if it is a one night stand."

Maul shrugs and tries to laugh.

"Probably a little too much information and a little too serious there but I figured I'd be honest with you."

"It's also pretty hard being serious while you're wearing a cowboy hat and robes."

Maul bursts out into laughter and looks around the cockpit to try to find a way to change the subject.

"Well anyway, you've got yourself an empty seat over there. Ever think about hiring some crew?"


Last edit: 25 Apr 2019, 7:22pm
25 Apr 2019, 9:01pm
Khelan looks amused by Maul's story about the girl.

"So wit yer sayin is ye hivnae a clue aboot wit tae dae wen it comes tae matters of the opposite sex an ah shudnae huv left ye tae yer own devices?"

He gives Maul a huge cheesy grin before becoming serious for a moment.

"See that pish yer spouting aboot bein toxic? It's a load of shite and ye fuckin know it. Ah know fine well who ye are and wit ye've done an ah know how much of a price wis oan yer heid fur it. We've all dun shite we're no proud of hell ah know ah've made a few poor choices in ma time but Ah try no tae dwell oan them or else they'll destroy me. Ye've proven yersel tae me an while ye are still a wee bit saft in the heid ye've been daein yer best tae change. Ah mean granted it took me nearly blowin ye oot an airlock tae get some sense intae ye goat there in the end."

Khelan thinks for a few moments.

"As fur crew Ah've been thinking aboot that an well Ah want ye tae know that if ye want it there's a place oan the Prid fur ye if ye want it that is. An tell ye wit Ah'll even offer ye 40% of wit we make an Ah'll teach ye how tae act aroon wimmen, how's that sound? Think aboot it"

A light starts blinking on the control console.

"Looks like they lazy arses huv finally started loading the cargo onboard, hopefully they dinnae fuck up the manifest and load four hunner tonnes of bio waste intae ma hold by mistake."

"As fur ma ootfit just remember this, Ah coulda been hivin this conversation wi ye in the buff."

He bursts out laughing and heads off to his cabin to get dressed.

"Ah'll see ye aifter ah git ma shower, hiv a wee think aboot wit ah said an dinnae worry ah willnae be offended if ye say naw"

Khelan walks out of the cockpit, closes the door behind him walks down the hallway, stops and suddenly gets a really bad idea. He quickly turns around, walks back to the cockpit doors a few steps and hides in a locker waiting for Maul to walk past.

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