Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

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30 Apr 2019, 6:05pm
Maul becomes silent and looks out at the stars for a moment.

"Fuck. I walked straight into the bar without even thinking."

"I never even considered them tracking me. I mean, it would make the most sense. What are they gaining from me being out here though? I figured they'd just as much kill me."

"Before I start jumping to conclusions I guess I need to find someone to check if there is one inside me somewhere. With all the bruises and cuts I had when I woke up, I'd never know where they could have put it."

He rubs his eyes and looks back at Khelan.

"If all of this is true and you somehow get mixed in all of this insane bullshit, well....I'm sorry."

Maul smirks.

"I suppose you could always throw me out the airlock though." Maul says sarcastically.
30 Apr 2019, 8:15pm
"Well if ye think aboot it, trackin ye means they know where ye are and when yer gettin too close tae somewhere ye shouldnae be. Oar yer packed fulla explosives or something like that and they're waitin fur ye tae be some place where a crazy wid try some shite and BOOM!!! ye turn yersel an any poor basturd nearby intae abstract wall art."

Khelan chews his bottom lip for a moment or two.

" Right ye've goat two....ok three choices, option the furst, ah take ye tae where ye last saw yer krait and ye dae wit ye want frae there. Opinion two, we take a wee trip tae Hondo City and see wit the tech nerds who did ma eye and Leo have tae say. Finally an Ah'm startin tae warm tae this wan is Ah shout "Raxxla, remember Raxxla" at ye an fire ye oot the airlock an dependin oan how Ah'm feelin at the time Ah may or may no gie ye a remlock lid first."

He grins at Maul

"Relax mate, Ah'm no gonnae space ye. Knowin ma luck ye'd get sooked intae an intake oar sommat and Ah'd hiv tae spend ages getting gooey Maul chunks oota poor Leo's systems."

"We'll dae wit ye want, yer ma mate an this sure beats shifting bio-waste frae wan place tae the next."
30 Apr 2019, 9:21pm
Maul thinks for a moment.

"I say we go visit your tech pals in Hondo City and see what they think. If there is a tracker and its really only just a tracker and not explosives or some shit, well, then maybe we can come up with a plan from there. Hopefully, I can learn a thing or two from these guys, that is, if they're not a bunch of assholes. I'm always willing to learn more about hacking and tech stuff in general."

Maul rubs the back of his neck and looks over to Khelan.

"So, I guess we're just diving right back into then, huh?" He says with a smile.

"Thanks, by the way, for all of this."
30 Apr 2019, 11:38pm
Khelan smiles at Maul.

"Dinnae mention it, we're mates it's wit we dae"

He reaches over to the nav panel and starts entering the coordinates for Hondo City.

"It's gonnae take a guid few jumps tae get there, we're going to be deep intae Li-yong Thingywotsit space and we're flyin economical tae help keep us affa the radar an in fuel. Tho speakin o which we're haulin a belly fulla gold so Ah think we might wanna get that tae fuck oota the hold first chance we get. Ah still get the heebie jeebies aboot that fuckin Fer-De-Lance that jumped us."

He swivels his chair around to face Maul.

"Leo reckons 25 jumps at the moment, its a bitty a trek but it's gonna be worth it tae make sure ye don't go Tic-tic-tic-tic BOOM!!! shake-shake-shake the room. Ye'know wit Ah'm sayin?"

"Noo a cupple a things tae remember when we get here, the station's ran by some no very nice people but as long as ye keep yer nose clean an oota anywan else's business ye'll be fine. Also an Ah know this'll be tough fur ye but try no tae piss anywan oaf, especially if they're missing a bitty their pinkie finger oan their left hand."

Khelan grins at Maul before continuing.

"Lastly these blokes are mad keen oan formalities an shite so when ye meet the bloke we're gonna see wit ye want tae say tae him is this "Anata no okāsan wa jigoku de chin powo suu" roughly translatid it means "Ah wish ye an yer faimily guid health an prosperity"  goat that? Guid noo Ah think it's time fur me tae go an get a cuppa tea."

Khelan gets up and heads off to the elevator at the back of the huge cockpit and puts on a preposterous Shakespearian English accent.

"Mr Maul, you have the bridge."

He steps into the elevator and erupts into a fit of laughter at the thought of Maul greeting his contact with the "greeting" he's taught him.
01 May 2019, 1:27am
"Uh, okay thanks!" Maul says as Khelan leaves the cockpit.

Maul tries to jot down the greeting into his data-slate so he doesn't forget it.

"Jesus, I hope I at least spelled some of this right." Maul says to himself.

He slides the data-slate back into his pocket and then relaxes into his seat and closes his eyes.
01 May 2019, 9:03pm
Khelan wanders around the massive ship looking out the viewports at the expanse of space. He turns a couple of corners and finds the galley. He strolls over to the cupboards, takes out a mug and puts it under the drinks dispenser.

"Tea!" he says to the machine "White wie nae shoogur"

The machine beeps and dispenses the beverage.

"Share and enjoy" it chirps at him

He takes his tea and takes a sip.

"Leo how long till we reach Hondo City?"

"Approximately 48 hours at current rate commander." Leo responds.

He nods and sips his tea.

"How d'ye like the new ship and how are ye settling in?"

"It's impressive commander, I'm still integrating with some of the more stubborn systems but it won't take me too long."

"Magic, When we get tae Hondo Ah'm gonnae get Shin tae take a wee look at ye just tae make sure everythin's tickity-boo. Ah've goat the feelin that oor Mr Montresor is gonna be oot fur blood if Shin's bhoys find anythin wrang wi him, An Ah wanna make sure yer in tip top condition if an when we go up against the basturds what wronged him."

"As you wish commander, having a technician check my systems over is definitely a good idea."

Khelan wanders back to the door and back up towards his quarters, sits down on his bed drinking his tea and looks around.

"Man ah really need tae decorate in here"


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02 May 2019, 6:08am
Maul wakes up still sitting in the co-pilots seat.

"Ugggh....well, that was an awful nap." Maul says to himself.

Maul takes a look around at the empty cockpit before getting up and heading towards his cabin.

He flops down on the bed, wipes the sweat from his head and pulls out his data-slate to send Khelan a message.

"You think they can install moving walkways on ships?"

He thinks for a moment before sending another message.

"Oh, I would have told you this in person but I literally have no idea where you're at on this damn ship."

Maul laughs to himself and scrolls through his messages.

He stops on the message he received from an anonymous contact. "Hope you're okay. We need to talk."

He quickly jumps out of bed, grabs a small device out of his backpack and plugs it into his data-slate.

Maul turns around and sits back on the bed as he starts typing away on his slate.

"Maybe I can figure out where this message came from." He says to himself.

The small device lights up red each time he fails at making a connection.

The connection fails a few more times and then suddenly the device lights up green.

"Okay, well that worked. Let's see here." Maul says as he sifts through data.

His expression changes from one of determination to confusion.

"It came from home?.....Ray Gateway?"

Maul sluggishly puts the device back in his backpack and lays back down.

"Could it be her?" He thinks to himself.

He rubs his eyes and rolls over to try to forget about it and get some sleep before arriving at Hondo City.

"Ugh, damn co-pilot seat put a kink in my neck."
02 May 2019, 8:49am
Khelans pad pings as he receives Maul's messages. He reads them and fires back a vocal response.

"Ah'll consider it, but jus think how many calories yer burnin walkin aroond here. We don't want tae be gettin oota shape now do we?"

Khelan sits watching an ancient show about the crew of a small spaceship trying to make ends meet and their various adventures.

"Man ah wish that doctur bloke wid just open his eyes an see that cute wee engineer lassie is totally intae him."

The episode finishes and he turns off the viewer.

"Guid wee show that, but no as amazin as Ah'd been telt."

Leo's voice interrupts his thoughts on whether or not he should get himself a long brown coat to wear.

"Entering into an inhabited system commander, do you want me to find a suitable place to sell our cargo commander?"

"Aye, please Leo. Engage supercruise assist an Ah'll head oan up tae the bridge."

"Where's Maul?"

"He's in his cabin getting some sleep commander. Shall I waken him?"

"Nahh let him sleep, if he wakes up, he wakes up. We're no gonnae be stoppin wherever we are fur too lang."

He heads out of his quarters, stops to pick up something from his box of personal effects recovered from the wreck of his old python and up to the cockpit. He sits down in his chair and smiles as all the displays light up around him the moment he sits down. Khelan carefully places the female pilot bobblehead to the right of the scanner.

"Guid tae hiv ye back Tali, Ah've missed ye" he says to the figurine as the looming sight of an Orbis class station comes into view. He quickly runs through the docking procedures and sits back to let the docking computer do the rest.
02 May 2019, 6:15pm
Maul rolls over and sits up on the edge of the bed.

"Damned crazy dreams, can't even get a good sleep." Maul says while tilting his head side to side trying to stretch his neck.

He checks his messages and listens to Khelan's response.

"Calories shmalories." Maul says to himself, chuckling at his own dumb comment.

"Mmm, I wonder where we're at now?"

Maul stands up and heads towards the cockpit but finds himself in the galley.

"Okay, I know there was an elevator. Looking for an elevator." He thinks to himself.

After wandering around a bit he finds the elevator and goes up to the cockpit to see they are docking at a station.

"Good morning, or uh, night, afternoon? Whatever time it is, I hope you're having a good "that time"." Maul says to Khelan as he sits down in his seat still clearly drowsy.

He notices the bobblehead and perks up.

"Hey, nice, you kept the bobblehead! Finally making the ship your's, huh? Oh, you know what we need? Those damned letters to spell "GROOVY" again!"
02 May 2019, 9:49pm
Khelan turns in his chair.

"Time is an illusion, lunchtime doubly so."

He looks at the chronometer.

"It's umm 14:00 hours, tae be honust oot here in the black time disnae mean much if ye ask me. Maist services in station are 24 hoor so Ah take the view that Ah sleep when Ah'm tired an Ah eat when Ah'm hungry."

He swivels back to face the front of the ship and brings up the station commodities market. He finds the listing for the gold the ship's carrying and hits sell. The market tells him it's going to be at least an hour to fully empty the hold and his total profit.


"Ah'm no gonnae leave the ship while it's gettin emptied, Ah'll be honust wi ye Ah jus wanna turn n burn. Quicker we get ye tae Hondo City an checked oot the better. If ye wanna go aff Ah'll no stop ye but ah dinnae recommend it"
03 May 2019, 7:40am
Maul ponders on Khelan's response about time being an illusion.

"Whoa, that shit is deep....I think."

"Ah anyway, I'm not planning on going out either. I'm with you on the turn n burn. I just want to get an answer to this whole tracker thing. Whether they planted one in me or not, I think I have a plan. Well, it's not really a plan as much as it is just me potentially walking into an ambush. I'm working out the details. It's uh......complicated."

Maul can see Khelan is likely confused by his nonsensical rambling.

"Trust me. Once we figure this tracker thing out I'll explain everything in better detail."
04 May 2019, 12:15am
Khelan looks over to Maul.

"Just ye take care when ye dae go aifter these folk wit wronged ye, if ye die oan me Ah'll kick yer airse right intae the middle o next week. Y'here me?"

"In all seriousness tho as long as yer plan disnae involve firin me oot the airlock oar oota anythin else fur that matter Ah'm in. The oanly fucker who gets tae mess with ma mate is me. Tho the idea aboot havin a tracker in ye so Ah know yer no gettin intae bother when Ah'm no aroond tae keep ma eye oan ye is a good wan. Maybe Ah'll get Shin tae dae that tae ye when he's checkin ye oot.... Oar maybe a wee electro shock device... Ye piss me aff oar dae somethin daft and ZAPP!!! 2,000 volts right up yer bahookie. That'd soon learn ye"
04 May 2019, 5:02am
Maul looks at Khelan for a moment before laughing.

"Sounds like a pretty solid plan you have there. Maybe we both get electro shock devices and let Leo here decide when to zap us." He says sarcastically.

"Nah, nobody should need firing out of an airlock with this plan but there are some variables though."

Maul thinks for a moment and gets his data-slate out.

"You know, we have time to kill don't we? I'll just fill you in on some stuff."

He stands up and walks over to Khelan to show him the message he revived from an anonymous contact that read "Hope you're okay. We need to talk.".

"See that? I was sent that when we were back in Junga. At the time I tried not to think too much about it but earlier in my cabin I tracked down the source location of the message. It was sent from Ray Gateway."

Maul puts the data-slate back in his pocket and leans against the dash area with his arms crossed.

"That could mean two things. It's either The Corporation trying to fuck with me somehow or it's Vega."

He drops his head and sighs before continuing.

"Vega was someone I was working with a few months ago. We never met in person but they had loads of information on The Corporation and happily handed it over to me. With this information I was able to figure out who their leader was and also the location of their largest narcotics manufacturing plant. Their leader was a woman named Tessa Sonder, on paper she looked like a successful business woman who was raising her daughter alone but, she was secretly running The Corporation.  So with this information I devised a plan. Which I admit I'm not the greatest at but whatever. The plan was to kidnap her 5 year old daughter and walk into their manufacturing plant with a gun out and demand to see Tessa."

Maul raises his head at looks at Khelan.

"Her daughters name was Lydia and she was safe by the way. I'm not a total monster. Maybe a little crazy but not a monster."

"Now, Tessa showed up and was pretty pissed but I was secretly recording everything she was saying and it was being wirelessly sent to my ships computer. The recording device was discreet enough that they didn't find it. Good thing too considering they searched me and locked me up in a room to torture me for a few days. That's how I lost my right eye actually."

"Anyway, just to cut to the chase. Vega was using me as a distraction. That was their plan all along. Tessa was too busy trying to get the location of her daughter out of me. Meanwhile, Vega had somehow wired the manufacturing plant I was being held captive in with fucking explosives. Some big bulky fucker named Bryce Morgan was about to start chopping my fingers off when the explosives went off. I used the distraction to try to escape but with the smoke from the fires and everything else going on I had blacked out at some point."

"I woke up on the floor of the cockpit in my Krait with a message. It was from Vega. They had apparently saved me and brought me back to my ship. Also thanked me for the help and apologized for using me. They also informed me that they killed Tessa during the ruckus at the plant."

Maul smirks at Khelan.

"Here's the crazy part though. Vega is Tessa's sister. I'm guessing they have been feuding for a long time too. Vega is hellbent on bringing down The Corporation anyway she can. She told me she knew the location of Lydia and would be raising her herself. Also told me that this was all just the beginning."

Maul shakes his head while smiling.

"If I had to guess who this message is from, it would be her. She probably has another crazy ass idea up her sleeve to finally put an end to all this."

Maul snaps his fingers at points at Khelan.

"You know, you guys would probably get along great. Yeah, maybe even start a "crazy ass ideas" club." Maul says jokingly to Khelan.


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04 May 2019, 9:40am
Khelan listens to Maul's story and let's out a low whistle.

'Man when ye get mixed up in shite ye really get mixed up in shite. Up until that last joab maist trouble ah hid wis makin sure ah didnae get ma heid kicked in frae shaggin some other blokes missus."

"This Vega chick sounds like she's a cupple a sandwiches short of a picnic, watch yersel aroon her."

He thinks for a couple of moments.

"Noo this might be a bit of an oot there thought, but did ye ever stop tae think that she might have used ye tae take care of her sister so that she could take over runnin the corporation? Think aboot it a random crazy storms in, shoots up the place and starts chuckin explosives aroond. The whack-job kills the boss and her sister manages tae take oot said whack-job, leavin her prime position tae take over her affairs. She's alriddy a hero in the eyes of the other folk in the corporation so naewan opposes her especially when she produces her sisters will namin her sole beneficiary an her successor in the corporation providid she takes care of the wean."

"It's how Ah'd dae it if ah wanted tae get ridda somewan an keep ma mitts clean"
04 May 2019, 10:13am
Maul nods in agreement.

"This whole thing is a mess. It's kind of funny to think about though. I ran and went into hiding from all of this for nearly a year. If they would have left me alone instead of trying to track me down and tie up a loose end, I'd probably be sitting in my apartment right now trying to decide between cereal or buttered toast for supper."

"For all I know, you could be right about Vega. In the letter she left me, she mentioned that The Corporation tore their family apart and that she warned her sister not to get mixed up with them."

Maul stops to think for a second.

"She's pretty deceptive though. So, I don't know. I don't trust her at all but if anyone knows where and how to hit these guys it would be her."

Maul shrugs and walks back to his seat.

"Well, I guess we'll find out who the message was from after we sort out this tracker business. I'm just going to go home and respond to the message and wait for someone to show up. Oh, and also hope it's not an ambush."

Maul looks over at Khelan.

"That's a bad plan isn't it? Like I said, I'm still working out the details."

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