Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
29 May 2021, 2:09pm
Veronica blinks twice at the stranger, first in surprise and then in irritation.

"Well! I was gunna say 'Come in, mate, an' welcome to the party'. But seein' as you ain't brought a bottle, I've changed my mind."

She squares up to the stranger and gives him a defiant glare.

"You just listen to me, sunshine. That little veiled threat of yours don't cut no ice with me, 'cos I've 'eard more threats than you've 'ad 'ot dinners. First off, I don't need to be done anythin' with, especially not by the likes of you. I'm perfectly 'appy out in the wild, as you put it. I dunno who you people are, or what yer game is, but whatever it is you think I've seen an' learned, well, you needn't worry. I know 'ow to keep my trap shut. So if you could just give me a ride back to where my ship's parked, we can all go our merry ways an' say no more about it. All right?"
29 May 2021, 2:10pm
"I like her," says Yolanta. "She reminds me of me."
29 May 2021, 2:44pm
The man smiles, his eyes dangerous.

"I'm afraid that at this level, the word of a stranger simply doesn't suffice. There is no going back to whatever you were doing before. But the compensation is considerable, which should satisfy any mercenary concerns."

Amusement spreads over his features.

"You and Captain Ridge here will be stuck with each other for the time being, I fear. I don't know whether to congratulate or commiserate on his behalf."

He glances upward, his eyes fixed upon the skull in Ridge's hand, dangled over the chamber.

"I will take possession of the relic, captain. You have labored enough for one day, and we must see about getting you a new ship. Pity what happened to your last one. It had such..."

His smile returns.

"... character."
29 May 2021, 2:49pm
Michael cocks his head to the side. He continues to hold the skull over the insectoid chamber.

"We both know that these things never really die," he growls. "And this one chased me halfway across the Bubble. I'm gonna need some kind of guarantee as to my safety."

He glances down to Katie, swallowing.

"Our safety."


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29 May 2021, 2:53pm
The man's smile vanishes, though the amused look in his eyes persisted.

"My dear boy," he says. "There is no safety this side of the grave. But my associates are confident that this...being... can be contained. That is all I can say."

He turns back to Katie, his dangerous smile returning.

"Or must we do this the unpleasant way?"


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29 May 2021, 4:31pm
"Y'know what," says Veronica, "as job offers go, yours 'as to be one of the crappest I've ever 'eard. You really do need to do some work on yer people skills, mate. They stink. You smile too much, an' all. My dad always says never to trust people who smile too much."

She takes a few steps away from the stranger.

"All this super secret service stuff you're spoutin'? It ain't for me. I tried bein' a copper, see, an' it didn't take. Too many rules an' regs. Too much bullshit an' bureaucracy. Too many guv'nors with their 'eads up their arses, tryin' to bully people with veiled threats an' smiles. An' I never did like bein' bullied."

Veronica draws her pistol and aims it at the stranger.

"I'm 'ere to inform you that I enjoy doin' what I do. I may not make much money out of it, but credits per hour's never been important to me. I go where I please, an' I work with whoever I like. I will not be pushed, hassled, intimidated, patronised, coerced, manipulated or threatened. So with the greatest respect, sir, my answer is no. Or to put it another way, you can take yer job offer, and yer compensation, an' shove 'em where the sun don't shine."

She raises her pistol, levelling it at the stranger's head.

"End of interview."
29 May 2021, 4:33pm
"¡Magnífico!" says Yolanta. "I like her even more."
29 May 2021, 4:50pm
Ridge narrows his eyes, slowly coming down from the perch, the skull in his hand. He halts beside his partner, his voice low.

"Katie," he says. "Whatever you're planning to do, it won't work. Not with these people. I know."
29 May 2021, 4:52pm
Gideon's helmet glints from the holodisplay within. The amusement in his eyes grows as he clasps his hands behind his back.

"'Katie'," he repeats. "Is that the name you're going by?"


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29 May 2021, 6:38pm
Veronica smirks, then adopts a classically serene countenance. The pistol in her hand does not waver. When she next speaks, her accent is crisp, light and wistful, her diction clear and precise.

"'What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet'."

She shakes her head.

"Names? Overrated, mate," she says, resuming her normal voice. "I've used quite a few for what I do. You could tell me you was Denton Patreus, but it wouldn't make you any less of a git than you are already. Patreus is probably a piss-poor example, but you get my drift."

Veronica takes a step sideways.

"Okay, so you've got a minion somewhere who's dug up my name from Pilots Fed records. Facial recognition scan, was it? Cross referenced with my ship registration details? I know 'ow it works, mate, so there's no need to sound so bleedin' smug. Oh, and bring yer 'ands out front where I can see 'em, please. Slowly."
29 May 2021, 9:00pm
Michael's eyes narrow, his tone hardening.

"Wait. Katie isn't your real name?"
29 May 2021, 10:26pm
"No, mate. It ain't. I make it a point not to tell anyone my real name, see."

Without taking her eyes off the stranger, Veronica turns her head towards Ridge.

"Remember earlier, when we were talkin' in the cafe on Citi Gateway? You said something about not gettin' to own a ship just to be shouted at by some shrew. The shrew bein' me. I'd been givin' yer a bit of an 'ard time, but only 'cos you'd been tryin' to wind me up. Then you told me yer name, and I told you mine was Katie Minola."

Veronica's lips flicker into the briefest of smiles.

"Ever 'eard of a play called The Tamin' of the Shrew? Written by William Shakespeare. There's a woman in it called Katherine Minola, an' she's the shrew of the title. She's got a rep for bein' a bit of an 'andful, see, an' this bloke called Petruchio decides to tame her an' then marry 'er. I mean, it's total sexist bollocks of course, but this was Earth in the fifteen 'undreds. Women were second class citizens back then. Anyway, that's why I told yer my name was Katie Minola."

Her eyes flick across to meet Ridge's gaze.

"My real name's Vayle. Veronica Vayle."


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29 May 2021, 11:25pm
Ridge cocks his head to the side, bowing in an exaggerated manner. His voice drips with sarcasm.

"Well... now that we've been properly introduced, how about you lower the gun so that I'm not as convinced that I was working with a lying swindler this whole time?"


Last edit: 29 May 2021, 11:32pm
29 May 2021, 11:33pm
Tyrran raises his eyebrows.

"Now I like her."
30 May 2021, 8:21am
Veronica does not lower her pistol. She holds Ridge's reproachful stare for a moment or two, then looks at Tyrran and Yolanta.

"I've saved 'is life twice since we got 'ere," she says, her words oddly slurred. "An' 'ave I 'ad so... so much as a word of... of..."

She shakes her head as if to clear it, her gun arm faltering slightly. Then she seems to rally, defiantly raising the pistol once more at the stranger.

"Listen," she says, her voice a little weaker than before. "Can we go... back to your ship? I feel... feel..."

Her breathing becomes faster, heard by the others over their comms. Veronica's shoulders slump. Her gun arm lowers and she begins to sway, the pistol falling from her grasp. She looks at her wristcom.

"Ohh, shhh--"

Veronica passes out and slowly sinks to the floor.

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