Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
30 May 2021, 10:17am
Michael leans in.

"Ka- Veronica?"

The woman's legs give out, slowly sinking to the floor.

"Veronica?"

Michael catches his partner just before she would have dead-weight fallen, her eyes rolled back and her nose bleeding. He hold up her arm.

Veronica's suit is out of air.

Michael spins, turning to the others.

"She's out of air!"
30 May 2021, 10:21am
Gideon steps forward, kneeling before Michael and Veronica. He nods to the woman, reaching out for the skull.

"It appears," he says with deceptive gentleness, "that beggars can no longer be choosers. Give me the relic. Take her to my ship."
30 May 2021, 10:28am
Tyrran witnesses the exchange, keeping a weary eye around the chamber as Ridge follows Gideon out, carrying the unconscious Veronica. He glances to Yolanta.

"Looks like we're done here, mi amor."

The android squirms beneath his boot, writhing feebly with slagged-out limbs. Andor looks down upon the artificial, so little of its once-humanlike face remaining. He points his carbine and annihilates it with a short burst, glowing bits of it flying. The mechanical ceases movement, relaxing in biomechanical death.

A satisfied sneer spreads across his Iberian features.

"Correction. Now we're done."


Last edit: 30 May 2021, 1:30pm
30 May 2021, 5:32pm
A short time later, Veronica stirs from her unconscious state. She is lying on a ship's bunk, lightly strapped down by a standard low-g restraint. She hears a familiar male voice, distant yet close.

"She's coming to."

Opening her eyes, Veronica finds Ridge and the stranger standing over her. Both are now wearing ordinary remlock suits. Veronica reaches for her plasma pistol, only to discover both it and the holster gone. She has also been relieved of the grenade belt and carbine rifle. Releasing the restraint strap, she swings her legs over the side of the bunk and sits up, eyeing the stranger warily.

"Where are we?" she asks, her voice dry and weak. "Still on the planet?"
30 May 2021, 7:29pm
The stranger nods.

"Indeed. My... associates have departed. Soon others will arrive, specialists for a different task, removing all evidence of your little excursion here. Your belongings are safe, and will be returned in due time."

He turns, hands clasped behind his back, facing away from her.

"It occurs to me that in my excitement to acquire an impossibly rare item that might contain three civilizations' worth of secrets, I have forgotten my manners."

He turns, his eyes earnest yet sincere. For the first time, an Imperial pendent glints from his collar, a simple decoration amid the greys of his Remlock.

"I am Gideon Hathaway of the Chapterhouse of Inquisition. It is my task to ensure that Her Majesty's will is done regarding certain affairs–affairs of which the public must remain necessarily ignorant. But that doesn't concern you. What does concern you..."

He turned, now fully facing Veronica, his features softening.

"... is that I need your help."
30 May 2021, 7:44pm
Veronica stares at Hathaway, her eyes full of suspicion.

"You need my 'elp? What with?"
30 May 2021, 8:06pm
Gideon is silent for a moment before speaking.

"The days where I solve Her Majesty's problems at the point of a sword are coming to a close. A new age is dawning, one of nuance and complexity and danger. My task requires a broader set of tools, a more subtle touch. I have sent too many bounty hunters to their doom in places like Pegasi. I have placed brilliant operatives in impossible positions and still expected perfection from them. And I have been a party to deploying an entire squadron into futile conquest in Colonia. Yet the work must continue. Too much is at stake."

He pauses for a moment, looking at a map of the local sector, flickering on a holoscreen before again meeting Veronica's eyes.

"You are a freelancer, are you not? So be free. Be free and do as you will, never far from Ridge and with the understanding that I will have need of your talents from time to time. Like it or not, you are in the great game now– and certain interests will always, always regard you as a threat to be neutralized. Neither bluster, nor the ignorance of hexedit, nor a bullet in my head will save you from this reality."


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30 May 2021, 9:55pm
Veronica laughs, the strength returning to her voice and demeanour.

"So you're sayin' that I can do what I like, but that I 'ave to come runnin' when you whistle. It's a funny sort of bleedin' freedom you're proposin', mate."

She gets up from the bunk and walks right over to Hathaway.

"For the last time," she says in a low, implacable tone, "I do not want to work for you. I will not work for you. I will never work for you. And I am not blusterin'."


Last edit: 31 May 2021, 8:21am
30 May 2021, 10:27pm
Gideon doesn't lose his cool, and doesn't react to Veronica's outburst. Instead he smiles, his old self returning, the operative replacing the diplomat.

"Miss Vayle," he says. "You will receive your wish and never, ever work for me. But you shan't like the details, I fear."

His smile, so deceptively warm, grows.

"Nuance, remember?"


Last edit: 30 May 2021, 10:39pm
31 May 2021, 8:08am
"Details?" repeats Veronica. "What details? If it means I get shot of you forever, then I don't care about the details."

She looks across the cabin to where Ridge stands watching. There is a strange, disturbingly uncomfortable expression on the man's face. An expression of... regret?

Veronica turns back towards Hathaway.

"So what's the catch?"
31 May 2021, 8:46am
Gideon turns to a nearby storage compartment, producing a small metallic vial. He holds it up before Veronica.

"Do you know what Hexedit is?"
31 May 2021, 10:34am
Veronica stares at the vial in Hathaway's hand. Her eyes are wide, unblinking, her expression suddenly fearful with realisation. She shakes her head slowly in disbelief, backing away from Hathaway.

"You wouldn't," she manages to say, her voice beginning to tremble. Then her anger and fear intensifies. "You can't! You have no right to take my memories! They're mine! They belong in my 'ead, an' that's where they're stayin'! Now let me go! Please!"
31 May 2021, 6:33pm
Gideon's tone softens into something gentle, disturbingly gentle.

"You will be let go," he says. "And you'll be as free as the day you partnered with Ridge."

He advances, pulling the tip from the vial, a short, thin needle exposed.

"There's no pain, I'm told. Just a little time lost."


Last edit: 31 May 2021, 6:42pm
31 May 2021, 6:34pm
Michael looks away, his jaw set, his eyes hard.
31 May 2021, 8:08pm
"But I don't..."

Veronica tries hard to put on a brave face, but her quivering lower lip gives the lie to her intention. Her eyes moistening, she slowly crosses the cabin and, shoulders drooping, sits on the edge of the bunk.

"Short of agreeing to work for you, is there no other alternative that wouldn't involve me gettin' jabbed with that stuff?

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