Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
27 Nov 2016, 7:25am
Apollonia's smile slips.

"Ballroom dancing?"

She takes a sip of her drink.

"I must admit cherie, I don't think there's much call for that particular style in Pegasi."

She waves her hand, dismissing the issue.

"And you have a boyfriend? Delightful! Where did you say he was based, Earth?"
27 Nov 2016, 7:43am
Kyla smirked. "Why, are you going to size him up t-." She quickly covered her mouth, realizing she was saying that out loud.

Frak, that wasn't supposed to come out. Act natural.

She quickly looked toward Jemine, hoping Apollonia didn't notice her slip.

"Ehem, yeah, Jem. You never told me you had a boyfriend. Is he nice?"
27 Nov 2016, 7:53am
Apollonia narrows her eyes, shooting Kyla a venomous glare.

She swiftly recomposes her congenial demeanour, looking back at Jemine.
27 Nov 2016, 7:56am
Kyla noticed Apollonia's venomous glare. Her eyes widened as a dark chill shot down her spine. Her hands fidgeted with her now empty cup.

If looks could kill, I'd definitely be dead right now, she thought to herself.


Last edit: 27 Nov 2016, 8:49am
27 Nov 2016, 10:53am
No call for ballroom dancing, hmm? That was quite a malevolent glance she gave Kyla...  

"His name is Sam, and he's very nice. His parents are from Sol, but they moved to Beta Hydri before Sam was born. We've been together for over eighteen months now. Sam's a bounty hunter, and hates pirates with a passion. When he was in the Federal Navy he lost his brother and a good friend in a pirate ambush at Rotanev. He's 25, four years younger than me."

All right then, if it's not ballroom dancing...

"So, precisely what kind of dancing is popular in Pegasi, Apollonia?"
27 Nov 2016, 1:30pm
Dr. Glaboski glanced at his watch. Fifteen minutes had passed. Time to head back to the medical facility. He had completed one and a half charts in that time, and constructed three Susans in his mind. He placed the stethoscope around his neck, packed up his tablet and tossed a credit chip on the table. He pushed himself up and strode pass the three women giving then a professional yet courteous nod before exiting the establishment.
27 Nov 2016, 1:49pm
Apollonia blinks.

"The same kind of dancing that's popular anywhere, cherie."

The slightest hint of irritation creeps into her voice.

"I don't know why you think Pegasi is so different to everywhere else. We are not aliens, non?"
28 Nov 2016, 2:04am
Oh I don't know, maybe it has something to do with the generous helping of rumours floating around of people disappearing in Pegasi with little more than a trace?

Kyla's eyes narrowed. And there was that Imperial Navy Admiral from Smurf land that went corrupt several months ago and was then "found dead," which was a suspected pirate attack. None of the schmuck pirate clans from within the Bubble are capable of waxing an Admiral like that.

Kyla was struggling more and more to keep her thoughts to herself as Apollonia's glare became more intense every time she spoke.

"I'm sure there's nice people out in Pegasi," she said, trying to keep the sarcasm out of her voice. "But the rumours coming from there don't help the reputation."
28 Nov 2016, 8:15am
Apollonia snaps, her voice edged with outright hostility;

"Rumours! That's all they are. Maybe you should learn to trust your own experience, rather than what you heard from the last loser you picked up at a bar."
28 Nov 2016, 8:59am
Kyla shot Apollonia a deep frown, her patience finally pushed beyond her limits. This woman has gone too fraking far.

"Excuse me, princess! First, I have some fraking standards when it comes to who I pick up at bars, and second," Kyla's face was now filled with anger, her gaze was now almost as intense as Apollonia's.

"You want my own experiences? Let me tell you about a group of thugs from Pegasi who decided that I would be a nice fit for whatever fraked up operation they had going there, plucked from a station as I am wandering about, doing my own thing."

"You try sitting in a fraking brig of a starship, listening to people telling each other in explicit detail what they'd like to do to you when they get to whatever shithole of a backwater in Pegasi they were heading to."

"You try driving half way across a fraking moon in an SRV to reach a settlement, hungry, thirsty, exhausted, hoping to hell that they're not also some pirate clan and praying to the Gods that you'll be able to get a transport home."

Kyla glared at Apollonia with a piercing gaze. "You try coming out of that without any reservations. Rumors become very convincing when you're merely a stone-throw away from being sold as a sex slave to some sick fraks."


Last edit: 28 Nov 2016, 11:45pm
28 Nov 2016, 9:42am
Apollonia's eyes glitter, her smile twisting;

"Ho! Très bien, cherie! Quelle passion!"

Her facade crumbles; eyes narrowing into an intense, hateful glare, lips curling into a sneer.

"Clearly, I've been focusing on the wrong girl... you're the true talent here!"
28 Nov 2016, 10:00am
Shit, what have I gotten myself into?

Kyla subtly moved her hand to her side where her pistol was hidden beneath her jacket. Anger and fear were fighting for control of her face. Her piercing eyes remained fixed on Apollonia.

"Cherie," she said, venomously. "You're still focusing on the wrong girl. Don't even think about it!"
28 Nov 2016, 10:19am
Her eyes darting to the movement of Kyla's hand, Apollonia slowly stands.

She straightens her dress and gives Jemine a silent nod, before shooting Kyla a final glare.

"Bonsoir, chéri. Watch your step out there."

She backs away a few steps, then paces out of the venue, tapping on her PDA.
28 Nov 2016, 10:20am
Oh, dear. Pity. We seemed to be getting along so nicely...

"I think I can guess what type of 'dancers' they're looking for, Kyla. It may surprise you to learn that I've done that sort of dancing, too. Many, many times. That's a part of my life which is not something I care to go back to. I think Appolonia finally showed us her true colours. And they certainly aren't as white as that dress she's wearing."


Last edit: 28 Nov 2016, 10:34am
28 Nov 2016, 10:38am
Kyla looked around the area, checking for signs of the dreadlocked woman and her hulking companion. Her hands were shaking from the encounter with Apollonia.

"Jem, if she had her way, you'd be doing that all over again, but I'd wager that it'd be a lot worse than when you did it before. I was already one step away from becoming one of those sinister rumours once. I'm glad I lied about where I came from... I had a weird vibe from her as soon as she approached us in the bar."

Kyla sighed. "It kinda sucks that my intuition was right, huh?"


Last edit: 28 Nov 2016, 10:44am

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