Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
24 Nov 2016, 9:49pm
Kyla sprints into the scene, catching up with Jemine. "Okay, can someone tell me what the frak just happened? First we're sitting back, enjoying a drink, then we have captain action hero knocking himself out and then the circus came to town!"

She paused to catch her breath. "Is this some unexpected side effect of the Toofla, or did all that really just happen??"
24 Nov 2016, 11:25pm
What a weird day this has been...

"Nothing to do with the gin, Kyla! Your circus boy was actually the vindictive - and rather eccentric - ex of Apollonia's boss. The woman with the dreadlocks, you know?"

Well, it's little wonder that whatshername - Marsha, wasn't it? - was so furious.

"I do understand how your boss feels, Apollonia. We're all saddled with memories and experiences that we'd rather forget. I'm sorry I yelled at her and called her a bully. I'm sure she's really very nice. "

I need something to get rid of the smell of rotting fish...

"Listen girls, how about a coffee? There's a cafe over on the far side of the mall. We can carry on chatting over a Mars Mocha Supreme. I'm buying!"
25 Nov 2016, 12:15am
Kyla smiled. "Coffee sounds really good right now. I don't think I need any more alcohol - not after the shit-show that just occured. I feel like I need to be somewhat in control."

She handed a credit chip over to Jemine. "That's for the Toofla."


Last edit: 25 Nov 2016, 4:54am
25 Nov 2016, 7:21am
Apollonia nods and smiles in agreement, allowing Jemine to lead on.
25 Nov 2016, 10:30am
"There's a sofa in the corner. Let's take that, shall we?"

This place seems all right. At least the customers look fairly ordinary. Ah, here's the service drone...

"Three Mars Mocha Supremes, please."

Now, where were we...?

"So, Apollonia, you said you were here on business. What is it you do, exactly? Anything exciting?"
25 Nov 2016, 10:54am
Apollonia sits, smoothing her dress out.

"Marsha and I are talent agents. We travel from system to system, looking out for singers, dancers and entertainers for promoters and venues in the Pegasi sector."

She frowns, looking down at the table.

"It's not easy, I have to say. Pegasi gets an unfair reputation. There are a lot of good, hard-working people out there, just trying to live happy lives."

She smiles again, looking back up to Jemine; "It's good to know that we can bring them a little sunshine to help with that."
25 Nov 2016, 9:58pm
Kyla grunted. Talent agents my arse. The big brick of a bodyguard already proves *that* wrong.

"That sounds uhh... Wonderful," Kyla interjected. "Too bad I can't dance for shit without several drinks beforehand, if you could even call that dancing."

She chuckled, taking a sip of the coffee. "Well shit, this reminds me of home a little," she said with a smile. "Mum used make hot chocolates for me that were very similar to this, without the coffee of course. She still won't tell me what she puts in it."
25 Nov 2016, 10:59pm
Ooh, yes. I'd forgotten that...

"You mentioned earlier that you'd come from Pegasi. All the stories I've ever heard about that region of space involve pirates and slave trading. I never thought there'd be much call for entertainers there."

Of course, it all depends on the type of entertainment you've got in mind. And I'm not exactly a stranger to one type in particular...

"Have you found any promising talent here?"
25 Nov 2016, 11:08pm
Kyla raised her eyebrow in suspicion, looking toward Jemine. Jem, I am getting this eerie feeling that *you* are the promising talent... And maybe me? Gods I hope not.

Jesus! Do I say something? What the frak do I do in this situation?


Kyla kept her mouth shut. The conflict in her mind was starting to really show in her facial expressions. She continued to sip her coffee, trying her best to hide it.
25 Nov 2016, 11:11pm
Kyla seems a bit suspicious. Hmm, well, let's see what Apollonia has to say before we jump to any conclusions. She doesn't look much like a pirate, after all...
26 Nov 2016, 12:04am
Apollonia's eyes flash with intensity.

"As I said, cherie. Pegasi gets a bad reputation, sure. But do you really believe that everyone there is a slave-trader, drug dealer or weapons trafficker?"

Her voice raises slightly, becoming impassioned;

"Of course not. Millions of people out there are trying to lead ordinary lives, struggling to make ends meet. Some succeed, some lose. Just like in the Empire or Federation. The people of Pegasi are no different to any other, cherie. They feel pain and loneliness. They crave entertainment and love, like everyone does. I for one am proud that I can bring that to them."


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26 Nov 2016, 10:17am
Yeah, but what about the poor sods who are forced to dish out this... "entertainment" and "love" huh? They're no more than slaves, and you Pegasi lot treat them like cattle.

"Well, I'm sure there's plenty of fine talent around this station," she said. "Have you had much luck at all?"

Really? *That's* the line you're going with, Kyla?

"I'm sure the red light district is flourishing with talent. I can't say I know from experience... I haven't been that way myself."
26 Nov 2016, 10:27am
Apollonia blinks.

"The red light? What kind of talent do you think I'm looking for?"

Her voice takes on a hurt tone, although her eyes still hold that intensity.

"I'm not interested in dock-knockers, I'm looking for dancers and singers," she turns to Jemine, her smile returning, "ones with natural beauty and instinctive talent, oui?"
26 Nov 2016, 3:54pm
Natural beauty and instinctive talent...?

"You mean me? Well, I'm awfully flattered, I must say! It's been quite a while since I danced properly, I'm afraid. The last time was on my birthday, back in April. My boyfriend and I went to a grand ball in a place called London, on Earth. It was wonderful, though poor Sam was exhausted by the end of it, bless him! And I'm sure that Kyla didn't mean to imply that you were looking for, umm, dock knockers."

I know perfectly well that she did. And I'm inclined to agree with her. I may be naive, but I'm not an idiot. Just what are you really up to, Apollonia...?
26 Nov 2016, 4:49pm
Dr. Glaboski needed a bit of a break. He had some time between doing his charts and dictation. His nerves were frazzled and hoped the bounty hunter was doing his job. And doing it well.

Ah, a nice coffee He thought to himself. There was that quaint little place in the mall. They had the best Iced coffee on station.

He packed up his tablet and made his way to the shop, his long labcoat billowing in his wake as entered and took a quick glance around.

Three absolutely gorgeous women were sharing a couch. His eyes didn't linger, as his profession taught him. He chose a table across from then, set up his tablet and removed the stethoscope from his neck starting his work. He made one more glance, a quick mental note of thier faces and started fantasizing about making then into 'Susan'. His mind raced through the various shade of make up he would use. Lipstick, blush and so on.

The server came by "The usual?"

He nodded and smiled. "Yes ma'am." And refocused his gaze on the tablet, but his mind miles away, lost in his fantasy.


Last edit: 26 Nov 2016, 5:13pm

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